Seeking a critique for Biz Opp Ad
I'm currently promoting a biz opp with some small classified ads. The problem is I have a great catchy line which is getting views, but then the body kind of falls flat and I'm not getting responses. I'm wondering if anybody would like to volunteer their time and give me some pointers on where I'm going wrong? Ok, here is the ad:
Scams, Scams, everywhere there's Scams...
Looking for a home based opportunity and feel like you are in a whirlwind of scams? I know what that is like ... I found a company with a solution. Let me show you what I mean - just send me an email requesting more information.
Thanks guys!
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