Please provide feedback on my sales draft
Please provide some feedback on the draft of my sales letter. Include content, design, offer etc. I will be adding some great bonuses, but I'm on the fence whether offering the bonus on the sales page cheapens the product or really offers more value.
Here's a link to the sales copy: http://www.topsellercoaching.com/salesdraft.html
Thanks,
Jeff
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