Need a Little Feedback On My Sales Page Copy
I hope that I'm asking this in the right place, because I'm still kind of new around here...
I'm looking for any copywriting advice or ways to help my page convert better. It's converting a little below 1% so I know there are probably a lot of ways to improve it. I've had opt in pages that convert 20%+, but have never written a true sales page that converts on a higher end product... so I could use some feedback.
My goal is it to get it to the point where it converts high enough to be profitable for affiliates before I roll it out and offer any JV's on it.
There are 2 pages (one for MLM and one for Real Estate) but the product is 95% the same, just tweaked a little for each market. The copy is similar, but slightly different for each.
The links are: Discover the Best Place to Market MLM and Get Free MLM Leads & Prospects... Online and Real Estate Website Builder & Creation Kit- Your Own Real Estate Lead Capture Page in 3 Days!
Most people who read this forum probably won't need a copy of the product (because it essentially teaches people how to build their own lead capture site), but I'm happy to offer it to the first 10 reviewers if desired.
Thanks.
Derick
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