I can't get my head round this copywriting lark
I've spent about 2 days working on my sales copy now. It just isn't clicking for me. It's not flowing and I don't like it.
It's at Rejuvenate: Turn Back The Clock
Can you rip it to shreds, please?
What "hot buttons" can I press for this target market? (I know, I should have done my research about the worries of this market, but I pretty much guessed - rookie mistake)
How do I lead into introducing the product better? At the moment there's very little copy and then BAM... here's the product. I feel I need a bit more copy at the beginning.
My list of features and benefits (I kind of combined the two, but not very well) just doesn't seem to work and motivate my prospects to buy. What can I do to improve it?
I realise it's not finished yet. I need some testimonials to fill thos testimonial boxes, so if you want a review copy then just send me a PM.
Let me know what you would do to make the salesletter better.
I haven't sent any traffic to the page yet, I'll be doing some testing with Google adwords in the next few days.
James
War Room Member
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.