Sales Have Dipped - Please Critique My Sales Letter
I made some changes to my sales letter that i thought would increase sales. The complete opposite happened. It didn't go down by much, but still it was supposed to go up.
Among some of the changes I made, was I got rid of the header graphic and reworded my headline.
I also added a free report that very few people are opting in for.
I can't figure it out.
I need a fresh pair of eyes to take a quick look and give me your opinion.
Any advice would be greatly appreciated.
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Thanks so much,
Damon
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