Pls i want you to look at the squeeze page and the confirmation page with a customer's eye and also as a copywriter.
1. Is the squeeze page enticing for anyone to drop his email (I understand the voice in the video is too low but i will change it later)
2. Is the confirmation page, which is the sales page alright?
3. What will make anybody not want to buy and what should i do?
This is the squeeze page and the confirmation page
Thanks for your reviews!