Review this copy and...
Thanks for coming by. I knew that the periods in the headline would get your attention :-)
I'm looking for ideas on how to improve the following editorial-style copy:
http://www.fear-control.com/index2.html
I'm in the process of split testing 6 different headlines (you can see only one of them on the page) but the results aren't as promising as I thought they would be. Some key piece is still missing.
According to my stats, over 50% of my visitors are staying for more than 10 secs and over 30% of visitors are staying for more than 1 minute on the page, but sales aren't coming in yet.
Any help is greatly appreciated!
Thanks in advance.
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