Hey everyone. I am just getting involved with the internet marketing niche and need a review of my squeeze page. I'm not a copywrite expert and mostly hire out to do my squeeze and landing pages. I like the internet marketing niche, so I'm 100% involved in this market instead of automating a business like I do in my other niches.
Looking for an honest review of squeeze page.
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Hey everyone. I am just getting involved with the internet marketing niche and need a review of my squeeze page.
I'm not a copywrite expert and mostly hire out to do my squeeze and landing pages. I like the internet marketing niche, so I'm 100% involved in this market instead of automating a business like I do in my other niches.
I wrote this squeeze page last night and would like a review of the copy. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I still haven't run any traffic to it and won't be making changes until I get a couple hundred views.
I'm not sure if it's too gaudy with the yellow background to some text. I don't want it to be over board.
My target market is new to intermediate marketers. The systems I teach can be used by the newest newbie, but can be extremely useful for those that have some internet marketing background.
Here is the description of my target market I wrote the other day:
The squeeze page is at Ultimate Niche Secrets.
I was just going to make it a 3 minute video and an optin at the bottom, but the weather here in Nashville has been horrible lately. I am shooting the video from my condo balcony that overlooks the city. I need a nice day to shoot this so it looks good. I'm trying to build that sense of success even with my background in the video. Once the weather gets a little nicer, I will be adding that video to the top of the squeeze page, or I might just A/B test the copy and the video.
Also, I made that header graphic. I'm no expert at graphic design but I like doing it. Is it stupid? I went with the sky picture to give the effect of "sky's the limit" type deal.
Once again any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
Travis
I'm not a copywrite expert and mostly hire out to do my squeeze and landing pages. I like the internet marketing niche, so I'm 100% involved in this market instead of automating a business like I do in my other niches.
I wrote this squeeze page last night and would like a review of the copy. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I still haven't run any traffic to it and won't be making changes until I get a couple hundred views.
I'm not sure if it's too gaudy with the yellow background to some text. I don't want it to be over board.
My target market is new to intermediate marketers. The systems I teach can be used by the newest newbie, but can be extremely useful for those that have some internet marketing background.
Here is the description of my target market I wrote the other day:
The squeeze page is at Ultimate Niche Secrets.
I was just going to make it a 3 minute video and an optin at the bottom, but the weather here in Nashville has been horrible lately. I am shooting the video from my condo balcony that overlooks the city. I need a nice day to shoot this so it looks good. I'm trying to build that sense of success even with my background in the video. Once the weather gets a little nicer, I will be adding that video to the top of the squeeze page, or I might just A/B test the copy and the video.
Also, I made that header graphic. I'm no expert at graphic design but I like doing it. Is it stupid? I went with the sky picture to give the effect of "sky's the limit" type deal.
Once again any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
Travis
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