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The Best SEO Backlink Service, Link Wheels, Uses Angela/Paul Backlinks, DoFollow Backlinks, 100% Unique 200 Word Article Creation, 100% Natural Backlinks, Press Release Sites, Article Sites, PR3 Blog Links, and PR5+ Web 2.0 Sites

Website.com (removed company name) sells professional SEO packages to small/medium businesses in the eCommerce, Super Affiliates, Lead Generation Companies, and SEO companies. Up until this point all of our services have been geared towards Enterprise clients, until today.

We have just finished reworking our amazing SEO backlink technique and we are presenting our professional SEO services to Warrior Forum members, and individual webmasters.

How does our link wheel system dominate Google?

1. Quality Google wants links to your site that come from quality, highly ranked sites. All of our links come from PR3+ sites, and the top Web 2.0 and Press Release sites.

2. Unique Google does not like duplicate content, and penalizes sites for duplicating content, so all of our articles are unique. Each article is written by hand by our team.

3. Related Content Google looks for sites that are related to one another when calculating the value of links, so related sites pass more link juic.de All of our articles we write are based on your site's specific niche and category. If you supply us with an article, we can re-write the article to maximize your marketing in each of the link wheel spokes.

4. Natural Google likes links to look natural, and our link wheels are essentially 116 microblogs. Similar to Twitter, each of our 116 sites have 200+ words of content related to your niche. With Twitter generating thousands of links on a daily basis, Google likes these microblogs with little tidbits of information and values the links and the link juice very highly.

5. Diversity Google gets suspicious of the same set of sites linking to a single site, so we take our network of 116 random sites, and they all interlink to each other in a random, chaotic way. None of our sites have reciprocal links, and all of them are on different C-class servers, giving your targeted site the most diverse set of links you can find.

6. Immediacy Unlike most link building services, we finish all of our projects within 2-3 business days, not 2 weeks, not 1 month. Also, when you place your order, you are sent a tracking spreadsheet immediately that lets you watch your project get completed in realtime. You also receive a login for our project management system that lets you track past, present, and future orders, all free for being our client.

So, what is a link wheel? A link wheel is an advanced backlink building process where we create new pages on Web 2.0 sites, Article/Press Reelase Sites, and our PR3 blog network and interlink these pages.

Each page is linked to 1 other page in our link wheel and all of the pages link back to your targeted site.

By interlinking these pages, we give them fresh backlinks from pages that are related to them in content, and help the sites move out of the Google sandbox faster and give your site natural, dofollow, high PageRank back links.

How can I place an order?

We offer 3 link building packages, with the Platinum package including 119 total backlinks, and being your best value.

All of our packages are offered at a discount for Warrior Forum members. When you order 3 packages, you get $198 off your entire order for our Platinum package. Each package is only $483, a $66 discount from our single package pricing.

Below are our packages, to complete an order, visit our website to order your link wheel today!

Platinum $549 - 119 Backlinks (Best Value $4.67 Per Link)

* 35 Web 2.0 Articles of 200+ Words (PR 4 - PR 9)
* 56 Blog Posts of 200+ Words (PR3+)
* 25 Press Releases/Articles (PR 4 - PR 7)
* 3 Custom YouTube Videos Used Throughout the Wheel
* RSS / Feed Submission to 100+ ping list
* Up to 6 Keywords / 6 URLs

119 Total Backlinks Created
35 Web 2.0 Sites
56 PR3+ Blogs
25 Press Releases/Article Sites
3 YouTube Backlinks

Gold $349 - 74 Backlinks

* 21 Web 2.0 Articles of 200+ Words (PR 4 - PR 9)
* 36 Blog Posts of 200+ Words (PR3+)
* 15 Presse Releases/Articles (PR 4 - PR 7)
* 2 Custom YouTube Videos Used Throughout the Wheel
* RSS / Feed Submission to 100+ ping list
* Up to 3 Keywords / 3 URLs

74 Total Backlinks Created
21 Web 2.0 Sites
36 PR3+ Blogs
15 Press Releases/Article Sites
2 YouTube Backlinks

Silver $299 - 37 Backlinks

* 12 Web 2.0 Articles of 200+ Words (PR 4 - PR 9)
* 16 Blog Posts of 200+ Words (PR3+)
* 8 Presse Releases/Articles (PR 4 - PR 7)
* 1 Custom YouTube Videos Used Throughout the Wheel
* RSS / Feed Submission to 100+ ping list
* Up to 2 Keywords / 2 URLs

37 Total Backlinks Created
12 Web 2.0 Sites
16 PR3+ Blogs
8 Press Releases/Article Sites
1 YouTube Backlinks

To complete your purchase, visit our website -- website.com (removed)