Feedback on my new display ad for vitamins...

Posted: 15 years ago 11 replies

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You think it will work? Kinda went retro with this one...

Edit: Um, Subtle just PMed me asking if the people replying to this knew I was just joking about creating the ad...it's a classic ad from the 50's. I didn't create it. Heck, I wasn't even born until 1963...

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Don Schenk 15 years ago

ROTFLMAO

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J. Barry Mandel

15 years ago

Paul - I would LOVE to see that

Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan

I told them they should put out a product called-

How to Tell Your Ex To Get F#cked

I sent them to Mal for the copy. If anyone can create a killer
sales page for it, he can

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Rezbi 15 years ago

Lol!

Kevin, you one crazy hombre.
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dtendrich

15 years ago

Ah, if only the world was still in black and white... (with black in the back of the bus, of course)

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nadia712

15 years ago

Originally Posted by dtendrich

Ah, if only the world was still in black and white... (with black in the back of the bus, of course)

Hah, nice.

But yes, great ad. I think it'll do great. Uniqueness, at least when it's somewhat creative and well thought out (which yours is) almost always pays off. If I needed vitamins, I'd buy it!

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Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter

15 years ago

Originally Posted by nadia712

Hah, nice.

But yes, great ad. I think it'll do great. Uniqueness, at least when it's somewhat creative and well thought out (which yours is) almost always pays off. If I needed vitamins, I'd buy it!

Just to be clear Nadia...I was joking about it being my ad...it's a classic ad from the 50's.

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Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Paul McQuillan

You mean to tell me you are not creating ads for Kellogg's?

Just when I was about to admire you (for your body of work
and not just your body)... I'm crushed.

Actually I time traveled back to 1950 just to create this ad for them.

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