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This is nicely done, although I don't see a nav-bar. Is this to be your only page?

I'd make your big headline different from your slogan in your banner, rather than just repeating it. Sinc you have "gold" in your site's name, how about fitting that into your headline?

And Dear Friend is something you use when you can't think of anything else. How about Dear Fellow Blogger or Dear Blogger?

And why do you assume your reader has tried to make money from blogging already and failed? Maybe the reader has never considered the possibility of getting paid to blog [I know I barely understand the word blog - so making money from keeping a diary is quite a foreign concept to me], so your text might want to include this kind of visitor as well.

I like the way you use simple, uncluttered images and short paragraphs with bolded phrases. I'd add a tad more sub-heads. And perhaps, farther down your page, a couple of text-breaking-up images. The black blocks of text get a little monotonous, it'd be good to add color - even little scrollie-thingies that are centered between paragraphs? Or colored icons for each of your bulleted-list bullets?

I also like the liberal use of YOU. Very good.
Hope this helps,
Dot