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Real Estate headlines? - are these good ?

by Networking_now
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I have a report coming out, giving some tips for people interested in real estate, it just outlines some real estate tips (about 25).

Have any of you copy writers written for the real estate niche?

I just need some help with some headlines + description

Finally Revealed, 25 real estate tips!

Discover 25 real estate profit tips!

25 Amazing Real estate strategies Here!

Are they good? which is the one which pulls in more out of them?

Any copywriter who has done the Real estate niche before? do you have a better one?

My Description
-This report shows you 25 amazing real estate tips which can help you produce your property portfolio in no time.
#estate #good #headlines #real
  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Try this:

    You're Leaving BIG MONEY On The Table Without These 25 Exclusive Real Estate Entrepreneur Secrets...
    Grab Them Now While They're Still Free!
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    • Profile picture of the author Networking_now
      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      Try this:

      You're Leaving BIG MONEY On The Table Without These 25 Exclusive Real Estate Entrepreneur Secrets...
      Grab Them Now While They're Still Free!
      Thats sweet, thanks, but i want a short one 8-10 words max- like a sentence.

      That was good though, have you done copywriting in realestate ?
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      • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
        Originally Posted by Networking_now View Post

        Thats sweet, thanks, but i want a short one 8-10 words max- like a sentence.

        That was good though, have you done copywriting in realestate ?
        Oh, yes. Real estate is where I cut my teeth as a writer. Both content and copy.
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        • Profile picture of the author Paul Hooper-Kelly
          Hi

          How about ...

          25 Red Hot Real Estate Tips To Have You
          Laughing All The Way To The Bank

          - But Miss One ... And You'll Be Crying Warm, Salty Tears Of Frustration!

          Yes, I know you wanted 10 maximum - but if you want the best job done, you probably need more.

          And this combines promise of reward (one of the Four Rs) in the headline with the fear of loss (even more powerful than promise of reward) in the deck copy.

          Warmest regards,

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          • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
            25 Mistakes Made By Experienced Real Estate Investors

            I'm not sure who your target market is, so you can change that part appropriately.

            Mistake headlines work good because they make people wonder if they're making one of the mistakes.

            Alex
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            • Profile picture of the author Networking_now
              Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

              25 Mistakes Made By Experienced Real Estate Investors

              I'm not sure who your target market is, so you can change that part appropriately.

              Mistake headlines work good because they make people wonder if they're making one of the mistakes.

              Alex
              Thanks, but they wont be mistakes, they are tips to help them. Although that is a good one.

              It is providing 25 Real estate tips
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              • Profile picture of the author MarketingZen
                How about....

                '25 Jealously Guarded Secrets The Expert Real Estate Investors Don't Tell You...'
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  • Profile picture of the author AwesomePossum
    how bout something like "25 real estate tips that will boost your profits" or take your profits to the next level...something like that.

    Just make sure you add in direct benefits to the headline...like amazing or secrets won't do the trick.
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    "- But Miss One ... And You'll Be Crying Warm, Salty Tears Of Frustration!" I would definitely improve this... because it has tons of potential
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    • Profile picture of the author Networking_now
      Originally Posted by Nisip View Post

      "- But Miss One ... And You'll Be Crying Warm, Salty Tears Of Frustration!" I would definitely improve this... because it has tons of potential
      you would improve this? or use it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    Your pitch is too general, IMO.

    "Real estate" as a meme (look it up) may be a convenient
    term for you, but it's a hopelessly broad subject for
    direct response.

    Even for lead generation you need to get more specific.

    Get the who, what, why, how, where and when in there.

    Tell me you're gonna show me how to flip properties
    with no money down.

    Don't tell me it's "real estate tips" because that means
    different things to different people. While to you it may
    feel like you are casting a wide net, to most prospects
    it will be hopelessly generalized.

    You are NOT the only guy out there blabbing about how
    wise you are about real estate (no offense intended). There
    are a LOT of guys who want to make money teaching about
    real estate (probably because it's easier and less risky than
    actually doing it) and they are making HELLA NOISE on Twitter,
    etc. and many of them are being very specific.

    Here's the sort of stuff that gets under the skin:
    "Give me 16 minutes and I'll show you how you can be a cash
    millionaire flipping houses in under 12 months - using none of your own money"


    Real estate tips? blah.

    That's like offering a 7-up to a heroin junkie. He doesn't
    have any use for it.
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