Preston Ely/Than Merrill Sales Page

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Not a pretty page, not a pretty video, but it uses some techniques I've been considering using on video sales pages.

20 minute video. List of the "stuff" you get with "read more" links to show you more about each item.

Interested in what everyone else thinks: How would you improve it? What are the key points?

Here is the link:

FortuneBuilders Mastery Coaching Program
#ely or than #merrill #page #preston #sales
  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    Originally Posted by Kevin-VirtualProfitCenter View Post

    Not a pretty page, not a pretty video, but it uses some techniques I've been considering using on video sales pages.

    20 minute video. List of the "stuff" you get with "read more" links to show you more about each item.

    Interested in what everyone else thinks: How would you improve it? What are the key points?

    Here is the link:

    FortuneBuilders Mastery Coaching Program
    20 minutes of this guy earnestly chewing my ear? Pass. I'd have a lap-dancer giving the pitch in the video. And then when you click on the "See more" links...
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    • Profile picture of the author JohnRogers
      Looks just like Robert Allen's 'Mastery' Coaching Program.

      John
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