How to breakdown a Sales Page?

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Hey.

I am in the process of writing a sales page for my own product which will be priced between $67-$97 on a recurring basis.

Now for that sort of price I think it's very important the potential buyer knows exactly what they are getting & why they want to get it.

Therefore I feel the sales page is going to be quite a hefty one, however to stop it being boring, bland, generic and all the other crap.

What sort of useful things can I add to the sales page?

By useful I mean things that are there for a reason, might help increase conversions or send the message, communicate with my potential buyers or inform them.

Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    Based on the general nature of the questions you're asking
    and the price you'll be asking my recommendation is to
    either immerse yourself in reading the copywriting classics
    or hire a pro to create your letter.

    People want to know they're getting maximum value for
    their dollars. Everybody loves a bargain.
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  • Profile picture of the author ghyphena
    Ah... that sort of useful

    Benefits are always good. Price justification. Value for money.

    Loren's right, by the way - at a price point of $67-97 recurring you should consider hiring a copywriter.

    If you decide to wing it, I'd recommend you write your sales page this way:

    Make the offer. Explain why it's a good offer. Ask for the sale.

    Think about this: You may have a brilliant product - but how will the prospect know if you don't tell him?

    So, when writing your copy, explain why it's a great offer. i.e. "You'll be getting X, Y and Z. X is great because it will do for you 1, 2 and 3. Y is great because it will do for you A, B, and C." etc. That's the gist I would go for.

    Then, after you write the first draft, go back and offer proof to support every claim you make. Pretend your cynical best friend is reading your letter, one eyebrow raised, itching for a chance to mock that "internet get-rich-quick thing" you're involved with.

    Those are the useful elements I would focus on. Value. Benefits. Proof.

    You're probably right - you may require a lot of letter - but don't fall into the trap of writing copy just for the sake of writing copy because you think the sales page needs to be longer. Make sure every point you make builds up more value, adds credibility or removes risk.

    Good luck,
    Gil-Ad
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    Gil-Ad Schwartz

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