review of my salespage

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Hi, I'm a new member here and just recently launched a new site. I'm just looking for some honest reviews of my sales copy on the sales page. Does anyone have any tips and ideas for a guy's first clickbank product?

All help would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks.

www[dot]powerforummarketing[dot]com
#copywriting #review #salespage
  • The link is:

    Forum Marketing Secrets

    Who are you? Why are you making this offer? Why should I buy from you? You're going to need some sort of credibility and proof elements.

    Your second bullet says your product will tell me the importance of forum marketing - that's what your sales page should be doing. You need to let me know why it's vital that I become a forum marketing expert.

    What's the benefit? What do I get out of it? You need more bullets, or more copy, fully explaining this. You're telling me what I'm getting but not why I should be getting it.

    In fact, it contains such powerful information I may just have to go into hiding for my own safety! - This seems completely believable.

    'It's now or never' - ?? Are you going to be taking the offer down?

    Hope this helps.
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    • Thanks for the input. Both replies so far have given me a lot of direction. I'll get working on the suggestions right away.

      If anyone else has input, please let me know.

      Thanks,.
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  • Since alot of warriors said what I have noticed..

    Lets talk about 2 things..

    #1 - Your keywords.. for me it doesn't seem like the majority of people are going to search your long-tailed keywords to find advice on forum marketing. You are competiting in a VERY competitive market

    #2 - The price... I've looked at other competitors and theirs are $7.99-$29.99 so I am unsure of why yours is so high. Maybe better quality.. but just ask yourself.. "How much are you willing to buy this product for?"
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    • You have some good bullets in there.

      Price was mentioned, so you might want to throw something in there justifying the price. They're getting a $97 value for $47. Something like that.

      You have a good guarantee. You should strengthen your P.S. a little by putting your big benefit in there again. And you mention your 60 day guarantee in your P.S so that's good.

      Good luck with it,


      Bill
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  • Moreover, video. Many people do not bother reading. Provide a video with yourself explaining your offer.

    And credibility. Who are you ? Are there people who tried your product and liked it ? Provide their thoughts.
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    review of my salespage

    Hi, I'm a new member here and just recently launched a new site. I'm just looking for some honest reviews of my sales copy on the sales page. Does anyone have any tips and ideas for a guy's first clickbank product? All help would be greatly appreciated.