copywriters advice please, help
hi there,
we been making websites and software now for a while and not to bad on most things .
but writing sales or copy is new to us ,i was asked to set up a site
Redlightworld.com it is adult related so if offends please dont look
its been set up for around 3 months getting over 5,500 visitors a day nearly 500 members ranked in alexa at 118,900.
but what we wanted to do was sell our services to make these sites for people ,
just set up Adultbizz.com to sell this concept could any one take a look and see if the copy on adultbizz.com is good enough.
as we going to spend money on advertising soon and would appreciate some feed back from people who know what they talking about.
thanks for your time would really appreciate advice
sorry tried to put links in to check but it wont let me
regards ian
we been making websites and software now for a while and not to bad on most things .
but writing sales or copy is new to us ,i was asked to set up a site
Redlightworld.com it is adult related so if offends please dont look
its been set up for around 3 months getting over 5,500 visitors a day nearly 500 members ranked in alexa at 118,900.
but what we wanted to do was sell our services to make these sites for people ,
just set up Adultbizz.com to sell this concept could any one take a look and see if the copy on adultbizz.com is good enough.
as we going to spend money on advertising soon and would appreciate some feed back from people who know what they talking about.
thanks for your time would really appreciate advice
sorry tried to put links in to check but it wont let me
regards ian