Any Tips To Increase Conversion- Critique My PR3 Site- Advice Needed

by Dal.K
5 replies
Hi guys,

My site has been averaging around 80 visits from the organic search a day for the past 2 months.

xbox360repairguidex.com

It's been on p1 in the uk and US for the terms

xbox 360 repair guide
xbox 360 repair

which are high search terms.

I have been outsourcing alot of the work but surprisingly, the site is making less sales than when my site was lower down in the serps- weird, maybe something to do with the clickbank order processor, I am not sure.

Maybe I should be looking at other ways of monetizing the site rather than Clickbank, or perhaps the pre-sell is not primed to convert.

Does anyone have suggestions, advice, comments.

Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Iconik
    Hi Dal,

    I like the layout of your review/sales page. However, I think you could use a stronger title.

    Try something like this:

    How to Fix Any XBOX 360 with the 3
    Red Light Error
    in 1 Hour Flat, And
    Keep a Boatload of Your Hard Earned
    Cash
    in Your Bank Account and Out
    of Microsoft's Greedy Little Hands.


    I would also remove the adsense block from the top of your site, as their are competing ads running. You really want to give your prospects only one option, and that should be to purchase a guide through your link.

    Hope this helps your conversions.

    Mike
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    • Profile picture of the author Dal.K
      Hi Mike,

      I appreciate your response.

      Love the headline, I might try that if you don't mind.

      With regards to the adsense block, I only put adsense on a few days back because I thought I'd try another way of monetizing off the traffic which isn't converting. I had the same concerns too.
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      • Profile picture of the author Iconik
        I don't mind at all. I hope it helps to bring your conversions back up.

        Good luck with your site,

        Mike
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        • Profile picture of the author jukeboxhero
          "Why Bill Gates F#cked Up Your X-Box... And How He Plans To Steal Your Lunch Money To Fix It"


          1. I believe this headline would grab your demographic by their eye(balls) and get them to read.
          2. Get rid of the bolding on your impact... looks like $hit
          3. Definitely drop the adwords... You've got the equivalent of getting a hot chick back to your house after a night of listening to mindless chatter then offering her company to your buddy for a quarter..



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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Sanchez
    Oyvai! I'm not sure if that's something I would ever use, but got my attention, that's for sure!
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