Critique - Short sales copy - I value your time
I am a newbie at writing sales copies but I think I did alright with this one. I am currently offering free memberships on my forum website and wrote a sales letter for it. When my goals have been met I will change it to something else.
I realise that the details around it are distractions but I want to keep it the same as the rest of the website.
Thanks a lot
Andrew Gould
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