This is my first attempt at writing any copy. I have read quite a lot from this section of the forum and absorbed (I think) many of your tips.
I would welcome and appreciate any feedback on this sales letter. (The link is in my signature).
The package started as some PLR, which I then rewrote, and got carried away and turned it into (what I think) is a pretty comprehensive package.
Anyway - feedback, criticism...whatever is welcome, also any comments on how to close the letter. Its weak at the end - and so need some advice on that.