Critique My Sales Copy Please - Thanks So Much For Your Time
I have taken a few of everyone's suggestions, and created another draft of my copy. Some things such as the guarantee and the pics of the WF reviews I'll deal with later. For now I'm focusing on the rest of the copy.I really appreciate everyone's help.
Here is the original...
http://thekeywordresearchshortcut.com/
Perhaps you would be willing to read over my new version and tell me what you think.
http://thekeywordresearchshortcut.com/control2.html
Thanks everyone!
Derek
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.