Help with copy ideas! (iPhone Websites/Web-spaces)

Hello Warriors,

We're nearly finished creating iPhoneOptimized.com where we will be selling iPhone-optimized web solutions to the mainstream consumer. We put some quick "dull" copy in just to fill the front and thanks to a bit of feedback we've learned how terrible it actually is

I'm looking for help from talented copywriters. Help coming up with an idea, an angle or a process to help communicate the value of our product/service.

The website is "iPhoneOptimized.com" and feel free to constructively criticize

Here are just a few quick points that might help get the juices flowing:

Q: What makes iPhoneOptimized.com different from other iPhone website solutions?
A: The sites are browser based giving the ability to be cross-compatible with other mobile devices. Additionally, our system was built to cater to anyone, even those with NO technical or programming knowledge.

The main difference is that our sites are created from scratch - and you don't need to have a previous website to create one. In fact, we want to open up the eyes of the consumer to the full potential of mobile web-spaces. With our system you can quickly build mobile resumes, local marketing resources, mobile calling cards, mobile event guides and much more.

If all you want is a mobile website, then its as easy as customizing a layout and inserting text. You then simply request the redirect code and place it on your desktop site to redirect mobile visitors.

So that's the skinny - oh and we are smashing the current industry price points pretty hard.

I'm a bit stuck on where to go with this copy and I'm really looking forward to opening up some discussion.

Cheers,
Kris