A Little Help With Copywriting? Please?

It sounds like a sales page for Blogger. You give no reason why you couldn't just dominate google results with Blogger.

And, with the relationship between Google and Blogger, there is a built in credibility factor for the assumption Blogger might give you an edge.

The bullets seem fairly generic, like you could insert the name of any blog and the bullet still applies.

You haven't developed any unique competitive strengths for Wordpress over everything and anything else. Since it is going to be extra work, why bother?

I would shift focus to people who already have Worpress installed, pretty much running, but haven't got the results they wanted. You're setting yourself up for huge support issues when these people have problems.

Finally you haven't 1) Established yourself as an authority of any kind 2) Established your ability to successfully teach anybody, even if you can do it yourself.

We all know a teacher who knew their subject, yet could teach it. That's a separate skill. And you have to explain how you tried it on students, they had success and show the testimonials to prove it.

Is it good enough? That's a loaded question. Good enough to drag you along for years, just barely able to earn anything, yet not quite little enough to abandon? Possibly.