email copy - would you please critique?
I'm working on this email which I intend on sending to a list of 5000+ recipients who recently posted their Network Administrator resumes on a job board.
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The intention is to drive the recipients to my squeeze page.
Any insights, advice, general direction or the pointing out of anything that just plain sucks is greatly appreciated.
Thanks in advance for your help.
-Robert
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