Please Critque my Video Salesletter

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Hi,

I just created this video sales letter to promote an affiliate product that I use personally. I made the video to deliberately be conversational and heartfelt, but I don't know if the lack of professionalism in it hurts me. Also, I'm of course, interested in feedback about headlines, etc.

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  • Hey Justin,

    The sound is extremely low. I'd re-record and make sure to speak directly into the microphone.

    Cheers,
    Robert
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    • Hey Justin...

      Posting videos like this limits your feedback from busy copywriters who might not have time to watch your videos.

      Maybe if you post a transcript of your videos you'll get a better response.

      All the best,

      --- Ross
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  • It is OK except the sound is a bit low and show some enthusiasm about the product.
    Should you take care of the above two, it should do well.
  • I finally figured out how to fix the audio... Here's the new video.

    YouTube - A New Twist on Outsourcing for Small Business - MultiProfitability
    I appreciate all of the good feedback so far.
  • Justin, it's alright now with the sound. The delivery is pretty slow and I'll admit I didn't watch it all...it just takes you too long to get to the point.
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    Please Critque my Video Salesletter

    Hi, I just created this video sales letter to promote an affiliate product that I use personally. I made the video to deliberately be conversational and heartfelt, but I don't know if the lack of professionalism in it hurts me. Also, I'm of course, interested in feedback about headlines, etc.