by BBAkwe
3 replies
Hello

Kindly help.

I came up with these headings for a product I have.
I'd appreciate any suggestions to improve the headings and copy. Regards

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How to get your specific web page ranked above the competitors for $19.95 per keyword


If you know what keyword you want to get top ranking for, here's all it takes to do that


Why are we giving this exclusive page rank boosting report away for just $19.95?


Finally, no guessing at how to get high search engine rankings. Your custom report here.


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This detailed report tells you why your specific web page is ranked lower than others for a given keyword, and what you need to do in order to make your web page rank higher than others for that keyword.



Why is almost everybody worried about ranking high on search engines?

Obviously, appearing at the top of search results on Google, Yahoo! and others has a lot of benefits.


It enables you to build credibility with prospective clients, because it creates a perception that your product or service is superior to the competition.


It enables you to get more traffic, because more people will see a link to your website and visit it.


It enables you to get highly targeted traffic – people that are in desperate need of your product or service – because the keyword they enter in the search box is directly related to your business.


But...


How to achieve that high ranking?


The answer to this is simple and straightforward. Be better than your competitors. Outperform your competition by having your website optimized better for specific keywords that people type in search boxes when they are looking for your product or service.


See, search engines use complicated algorithms to rank websites for each specific keyword. They analyze the HTML code of pages on your site to determine how relevant each page is to the user's search query. They also analyze incoming links to your web pages to determine how popular they are.


So, in order to get your web page appear higher in search results that the others, all you need to do is make that page more search engine friendly than the competing web pages.


And that's where the value of this report comes in.


It tells you exactly how well the top competing web pages are optimized for a specific keyword. And it tells you exactly what you need to do in order to get ranked higher than those pages.


It's no black magic. Here's how it works: we check how well the contents of important HTML tags on your page is optimized for the given keyword. We analyze tags like url, title, meta description, meta keyword, body, anchor text, image alt tags, h1, h2, and h3-h6.


Then, we also analyze the quality of external links to your web pages versus the competitors, and rank these links by three categories: good, average and poor.


The result you get is a structured competitive analysis report. It compares your web pages to your top ranked competitors for each keyword. It also provides recommendations on what will make your web pages get ranked above the competition.


This report eliminates any possible guesswork completely. It spotlights the real world situation for your keywords, and explains what will change that situation in your favor.


During the next optional stage, we implement all our recommendations and make your website more relevant to specific search queries, as well as make it more popular by building quality external links.


As your website gets more search engine friendly, you can see how it's going higher and higher in search results every day.


Buy this report now
or get if free


If you only want the analysis and recommendations. This report is $19.95 per keyword.


But if you also want the implementation of these recommendations done, then the report comes free of charge. So we will only charge for the implementation stage.


The reason we are doing this is because we would like to give you a good offer. Be we can't give away this report alone for free, because it's not a product with some general suggestions. It's customized to your specific website and requires manual work.


The cost of this report will be deducted from the cost of the implementation stage. This way, you get the report free of charge.


Get the report for your keywords now. You'll be completely thrilled with your simple, fast and effective increase in search engine ranking.


To get started, go through the payment process and email us your keywords, your website address, as well as links to the competing websites.


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I appreciate your comments.. Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author 4freedom
    I would use something more catchy like...

    * Who Else Wants to Rank High on the Search Engines so They Can Rake in the Cash Like an Out of Control Vacuum Cleaner?

    * Insider Report Reveals Fool-Proof Easy System to Get Any Web Page to Rank on the Search Engines and Create a Flash Flood of New Traffic

    * $20 Can Buy Lunch or a Flash Flood of Guaranteed Target Traffic. Hungry?
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    Rob Fore, 6-Figure Affiliate Marketing
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    Hi,

    In your headline you don't need to sell, you only need to get the prospect's attention.

    And remember, you're seldom selling a product or service, you're really selling a concept. So you need to work out what concept you're going to sell. You need to know what your prospects really want.

    Cut your sentence length, some of them read too formal, others are just way too wordy.

    Maybe use bullets to show what your report offers.

    Why should I do business with you? There's plenty of SEO firms and experts out there so why should I choose you?

    Hope this is of use to you.
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    Andrew Gould

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