My sales page seems to be getting lukewarm responses and I can't quite figure out what else to say. Personally I thought it had good power of persuasion but my weak sales say differently.
I didn't think it was that bad but I've finally accepted (painfully) that a good writer does not automatically make a good copywriter. The link is
[7/8/2010 - I took the letter down to be redone- Thanks ]
I'm certainly not asking anyone to take a lot of time out of their day for a full critique, but if you could just give me your general feel. Is it too long, not long enough, unclear benefits etc. Perhaps the sales page is fine but I just need to rev up the traffic?
Thanks in advance for your time and opinions.