long sales letter - targeted to myspace crowd
I've got a sales letter that needs to be long enough to keep me out of trouble with the MD MVA and I fear it's too long for the short attention span of my target market.
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MYspace crowd... and other similarly slightly dysfunctional types and unfortunatly I belong to that last group myself.
The attention span of my target market is likely to be very short.
However if I leave out too much / edit out too much I might be getting myself into trouble with the State Government.
Product targeted to irresponsible people, probably more young people (younger than me anyhow)
codependents/ addicts will also fall into this demographic:
addictions are symtoms of codependency, codependency is a disease of immaturity...
People who failed to pay their bills is what I'm talking about here.
(and God I wish I didn't fall into this category but the shoe fits )
Should I shorten this?
What do you all think?
thanks in advance
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