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Your Critical Feedback Appreciated

by Sparklesperson
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Hi all,

I'm setting up a JV giveaway event in a none-IM niche, and would like some feedback on the pages as I get them done.

The first page is located here

This is not the live site, and as of this morning, this is the only page I've worked on. I'll update what pages I've written as we go along.

I'll update the graphics a little later today as some parts still have watermarks on them right now.

Thanks so much - you've no idea how much this means to me!
#appreciated #copy writing #critical #feedback #jv giveaway
  • Profile picture of the author JonathanBoettcher
    It looks a little broken right now... is this still live?

    I like the idea of getting both offers for $75, though making a $97 product worth $47, right beside a $296 product also for $47 seems odd to me... does weird things with people's mind as they try to assign value in their head.

    /2 cents
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    • Profile picture of the author Sparklesperson
      It's not live yet. I've had another individual tell me it was broken, although when I tested, it worked. I don't know why it's broken.

      I know, the oops page needs reworked.

      Were there any thoughts on the copy on that page?
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      • Profile picture of the author TianYan
        Still broken on when I saw it.
        I'll take a look for you when it is up again.

        Be Well,
        - Tian Yan
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  • Profile picture of the author rwil02
    The Oops page problem is using relative URLS for the images, etc.
    Should be root relative instead

    e.g.

    use /_borders/header.jpg instead of _borders/header.jpg

    can't really comment on anything else as i can't see it
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  • Profile picture of the author cfloyd
    I would love to comment on your page but it still seems un-operational!

    Good Luck-Cindy
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