Hubby Did My Copy! Should I Sack Him?
This is a 'tester' before I put together something more specific for fast and effective weight loss.
It isn't his job, but my husband has an interest in 'selling' and persuasion. Not for any other reason I don't think than the fact that it interests him.
Anyway, he wanted to have a go at doing the copy. He tried to use my voice, which is, as he says, very feminine and quite passive on my website (see sig for my blog).
So, he's had a go. But, both he and I would love to know if it's any good.
Obviously that'll not be clear until traffic is sent, but you may be able to inform us that either, it's pretty good, needs a few adjustments, or is totally useless!!
Feel free to share your honest opinion. We're not sensitive people
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