Im starting my education on copywriting, and the goal i have now is to get people to join my mailing list.
So of course i need a good starting headline.
Here's what i have come up with so far:
People were still referring to my old headline:
"FREE Expert Advice On 10 Vital Things You Need to Know To Truly Get The Hemorrhoid Treatment You Need Today... Guaranteed!"
Even after i changed it down below, so i figured to post it up here:
FREE Expert Advice On Hemorrhoid Treatments That will Stop The Burning & Itching Guaranteed!
I would love to hear some of your opinions.
My own opinion, is i think its a little long, but its 20 words and through the headline analyzer reaches people intellectually and spiritually.
Thanks for any inputs