What Do You Want From A Copy Coach?

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Hey everybody.

I'm asked constantly by other writers if I'll take them on as students.

My stock answer is no - I'm insanely busy, I genuinely don't have the time.

But...

Being one of John Carlton's Simple Writing System tutors has awakened a
passion for teaching that I didn't know I had.

And it's made me seriously consider putting together an official coaching
program.

I'm not saying it's something I'm definitely doing, but I thought it
may be a good idea to see what people would want from me.

Aside from all that, I know there are a lot of writers struggling out there,
and I think I could genuinely help them.

So tell me - what would your DREAM copywriting coaching consist of?

What are the main sticking points, the things that hold you back?

What keeps you awake at night, thinking:

"Man, if I could just _______, then I'd really get somewhere with this copywriting thing..." ?

I'd be very interested to know, and I REALLY appreciate your comments.

-David Raybould
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  • Profile picture of the author Shaleniie Devi
    Hi David

    It's great to hear that another Top Gun Copywriter may add coaching to his portfolio

    I feel that there are already plenty of "how to write copy" coaching courses but there is almost a dearth of "how to market yourself as a copywriter" stuff.

    In my humble opinion, I think that learning the writing bit is relatively simple (but may not be easy) however it's the marketing your service bit that's the sticky bit (speaking from experience).

    As I've learned from Paul Hancox, it's important to develop marketing systems so that we constantly have new leads streaming in and don't dry up.

    But the information on how to market/position ourselves since we are just starting out in this business is sorely lacking.

    To quote Mike Morgan in his comment on a blog post of yours "YOU’RE IN THE FREAKING MARKETING BUSINESS!"

    To answer your question...

    What keeps me awake at night, it's thinking:

    "Man, if I could just get clients, then I'd really get somewhere with this copywriting thing..."

    My two cents

    Shaleniie
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    • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
      Originally Posted by Shaleniie Devi View Post

      Hi David

      It's great to hear that another Top Gun Copywriter may add coaching to his portfolio

      I feel that there are already plenty of "how to write copy" coaching courses but there is almost a dearth of "how to market yourself as a copywriter" stuff.

      In my humble opinion, I think that learning the writing bit is relatively simple (but may not be easy) however it's the marketing your service bit that's the sticky bit (speaking from experience).

      As I've learned from Paul Hancox, it's important to develop marketing systems so that we constantly have new leads streaming in and don't dry up.

      But the information on how to market/position ourselves since we are just starting out in this business is sorely lacking.

      To quote Mike Morgan in his comment on a blog post of yours "YOU'RE IN THE FREAKING MARKETING BUSINESS!"

      To answer your question...

      What keeps me awake at night, it's thinking:

      "Man, if I could just get clients, then I'd really get somewhere with this copywriting thing..."

      My two cents

      Shaleniie
      Hey Shaleniie,

      Thanks for the feedback.

      I must admit, I felt the same as you back when I was starting out. It seemed like there were enough resources available to get the writing part down... but getting clients?

      Man, I had no clue.

      And that of course led to some very lean months indeed.

      This is great though, definite food for thought.

      Thanks for taking the time to post.

      -David Raybould
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    • Profile picture of the author arfasaira
      Originally Posted by Shaleniie Devi View Post

      Hi David

      It's great to hear that another Top Gun Copywriter may add coaching to his portfolio

      I feel that there are already plenty of "how to write copy" coaching courses but there is almost a dearth of "how to market yourself as a copywriter" stuff.

      In my humble opinion, I think that learning the writing bit is relatively simple (but may not be easy) however it's the marketing your service bit that's the sticky bit (speaking from experience).

      As I've learned from Paul Hancox, it's important to develop marketing systems so that we constantly have new leads streaming in and don't dry up.

      But the information on how to market/position ourselves since we are just starting out in this business is sorely lacking.

      To quote Mike Morgan in his comment on a blog post of yours "YOU'RE IN THE FREAKING MARKETING BUSINESS!"

      To answer your question...

      What keeps me awake at night, it's thinking:

      "Man, if I could just get clients, then I'd really get somewhere with this copywriting thing..."

      My two cents

      Shaleniie
      Hi David,

      A few months ago I asked warriors on this forum to help point me to a copywriting course and I had loads of suggestions. I eventually went with Paul Hancox, because like Shaleniie, I wanted to not only learn the art of copywriiting from a pro, but I wanted to know how to get clients and market myself.

      Having the knowledge is one thing, but without clients you are going to struggle to even recover your coaching costs. To be honest, most copywriting students would want everything that everyone else has suggested on his thread, but deep down I suspect that what they really want is to know how to market themselves and break into the big money. I think if you can incorporate that into your training program, you are on to a winner.
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  • Profile picture of the author JPROPS
    Hi David,

    It's strange because I get exactly the same requests! If I had $10 for every client who asks me to coach them so they can save money on their copy, I'd be a very rich man!

    It seems there is a huge market out their for copywriting coaching but most of us are just too busy with paying clients that we don't have time to dedicate to formulating and creating a great training program.

    Great idea putting it out there for people to request what they're looking for...I'd be curious to hear what potential students are looking for.

    Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
      Originally Posted by JPROPS View Post

      Hi David,

      It's strange because I get exactly the same requests! If I had $10 for every client who asks me to coach them so they can save money on their copy, I'd be a very rich man!

      It seems there is a huge market out their for copywriting coaching but most of us are just too busy with paying clients that we don't have time to dedicate to formulating and creating a great training program.

      Great idea putting it out there for people to request what they're looking for...I'd be curious to hear what potential students are looking for.

      Good luck!
      Thanks for the kind words.

      I'm hoping to get some real insight here.

      -David Raybould
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  • Profile picture of the author mattlaclear
    Hi David...I just saw your thread and had to jump in on it. If I were to hire a copy coach the only thing I would want him or her to do is read my copy and then critique with suggestions. Then have a follow up after all the edits had been taken care of. I have been writing my own copy for over a decade now and have been skillful (or lucky!) enough to be able to support my family of eight from it. But having said that I know I'm a hack and having a trained eye helping out would be immensely beneficial.
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    • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
      Originally Posted by mattlaclear View Post

      Hi David...I just saw your thread and had to jump in on it. If I were to hire a copy coach the only thing I would want him or her to do is read my copy and then critique with suggestions. Then have a follow up after all the edits had been taken care of. I have been writing my own copy for over a decade now and have been skillful (or lucky!) enough to be able to support my family of eight from it. But having said that I know I'm a hack and having a trained eye helping out would be immensely beneficial.
      Thanks for chiming in Matt.

      Great suggestion. I must say, when I got my first good mentor, it was having his direct input on my work that made the biggest difference.

      It made me improve FAST too - you can't beat the feeling of having all the guesswork and "maybe" taken out of a project because there's a pro who has your back.

      Thanks Matt, will keep this in mind.

      -David Raybould
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  • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
    Hi David,

    If I was going through the copywriting coach gauntlet again, number #1, I would want someone to be ruthlessly honest with me about my pieces.

    I would want them to unleash. Sentence by sentence, word by word. Every dash, every period, every exclamation point. I would not want them to hold back, even though I may curl up into a fetal position for a day or so afterward to lick my wounds and nurse my bruised ego.

    BUT--having said that, number #2, I would expect, in fact I would demand, that whatever coaching they give me WORK. Meaning if they say I should change my copy, it converts far better than before.

    In other words, I would expect the coach to *KNOW*, without equivocation, that whatever coaching they give me regarding my copy is going to convert.

    Otherwise, it's just another BS opinion.

    I don't think that's asking too much, if you're going to establish yourself as a copywriting coach.

    - Rick Duris

    PS: And yes, I do this with the people I coach. I know firsthand what it's like when literally millions are on the line and my coach/partner says "Not good enough. Here's what you should do..."

    PPS: David, something to think about: You may be unintentionally posturing yourself inappropriately. Calling yourself a SWS "tutor" and your Clients "students" tells me your service isn't about coaching, it's about teaching copywriting one-on-one.

    As a fact: I suck as a teacher. I really do. I have zero patience. I have no "curriculum." I work with real pieces my Clients give me to critique.

    Stated differently: I watched every episode on HBO's Hardknocks. It's about the NY Jets football training camp. I suspect everybody on that team knows how to play football. But the coach isn't teaching players how to play football. He coaching players to win a championship.

    To the point, I think you need to get clear about your offer.

    PPPS: One more example and I'll quit. A week or so ago, I stopped into Kenny's, the local music store. Saw a guy practicing before his lesson. I have some time to kill and and I ask "Hey, wanna jam for a bit?"

    He's practicing "House of the Rising Sun." Getting ready for his lesson. So I pull a guitar down, grab a pick and have some fun. He plays rhythm and I play lead.

    It was pretty good.

    Then he said "How do you do that?" I mapped the fretwork out on the backside of his lesson. He was amazed. A new world opened up for him that day, I swear.

    Now, I'll probably never see him again, but I know the feeling when someone shows me the secrets to success not found in some lesson plan.
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    • Profile picture of the author Hank Rearden
      What if your main goal isn't strictly to "crit" your cubs?

      (Or whatever Rick wants you to call them...)

      Break out the books. Week one - Read Vic Schwab's How to Write A Good
      Advertisement. Take notes. Study it. Let's talk about what we learned.

      Tested Advertising Methods...
      Scientific Advertising... My Life In Advertising...
      Advertising Copy... Breakthrough Advertising...
      The Robert Collier Letter Book...
      The Lazy Man's Way To Riches...
      Ogilvy On Advertising...
      etc.

      I feel like you can't neglect good, solid, foundation learning for "in the
      moment" critiques... because... If your letter is based on ****y
      fundamentals, my critiques can only bring it up to a D+ level.

      I'd rather a mentor teach me how to write a bullet than tell me four words
      to spice mine up.

      My 2 cents.

      - HR

      Except now - reading Rick's post again... Seems like you're putting
      together a "program" of your own...

      ... I'd love to see mentors who mentor. It's a much missed part of this
      community.
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      • Profile picture of the author Nathan Hangen
        Originally Posted by Hank Rearden View Post

        What if your main goal isn't strictly to "crit" your cubs?

        (Or whatever Rick wants you to call them...)

        Break out the books. Week one - Read Vic Schwab's How to Write A Good
        Advertisement. Take notes. Study it. Let's talk about what we learned.

        Tested Advertising Methods...
        Scientific Advertising... My Life In Advertising...
        Advertising Copy... Breakthrough Advertising...
        The Robert Collier Letter Book...
        The Lazy Man's Way To Riches...
        Ogilvy On Advertising...
        etc.

        I feel like you can't neglect good, solid, foundation learning for "in the
        moment" critiques... because... If your letter is based on ****y
        fundamentals, my critiques can only bring it up to a D+ level.

        I'd rather a mentor teach me how to write a bullet than tell me four words
        to spice mine up.

        My 2 cents.

        - HR

        Except now - reading Rick's post again... Seems like you're putting
        together a "program" of your own...

        ... I'd love to see mentors who mentor. It's a much missed part of this
        community.
        Don't know much about the post, but I love the name. Mr. Rearden is my hero.
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  • Profile picture of the author colinjoss
    Hey David,

    I second all the guys that want help getting clients.

    I'm currently running Adwords campaign for clients. Getting a lot of interest but few who are willing to pay the price.

    I reckon teaching how to get qualified leads would be a winner.

    Colin

    P.S. See you in NYC.
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    • Profile picture of the author MikeHumphreys
      David,

      Like Rick said, if I were starting all over, I'd want a mentor who really broke things down for me and wasn't afraid to break my balls or call me on it if I was slacking off. I've never had a problem with tough love type of mentoring (in any industry that I've ever been in) but maybe that's just me.

      Rather than repeat what others are saying... I'll focus on some other details to suggest.

      My advice would be to focus on the entire aspect of being a successful copywriter and not just how to write copy.

      For example... how do you structure the deal with the client so it's win-win? Not every client needs an online salesletter from scratch but many times they have multiple needs that need addressing for that project.

      How do you get royalties deals... or when is it appropriate to suggest them to a client?

      Speaking from professional experience, mentoring someone can be a rewarding and very time-confusing adventure. Your students/copy cubs will be a reflection of you professionally so I recommend you do your due diligence and only accept the right type of students (not just those who can/will pay your coaching fees).

      Hope that helps,

      Mike
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      • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
        Excellent point there Mike.

        Look at the Montello clan on this forum.

        Then you look at the production line of A listers Clayton Makepeace
        has turned out.

        Nothing more to add.

        All the best,
        Ewen

        Originally Posted by MikeHumphreys View Post

        Speaking from professional experience, mentoring someone can be a rewarding and very time-confusing adventure. Your students/copy cubs will be a reflection of you professionally so I recommend you do your due diligence and only accept the right type of students (not just those who can/will pay your coaching fees).

        Hope that helps,

        Mike
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        • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
          In other words, I would expect the coach to *KNOW*, without equivocation, that whatever coaching they give me regarding my copy is going to convert.

          Otherwise, it's just another BS opinion.

          I don't think that's asking too much, if you're going to establish yourself as a copywriting coach.
          Rick,

          I agree, that would be nice to have such a smart, all-knowing, no-fail coach.

          But from what I've seen, those with the most experience admit that they are often wrong about these things and the only way to be certain anything will convert better is to test it.

          So I'm not sure your dream is possible in reality.

          Marcia Yudkin
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          • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
            Originally Posted by marciayudkin View Post

            Rick,

            I agree, that would be nice to have such a smart, all-knowing, no-fail coach.

            But from what I've seen, those with the most experience admit that they are often wrong about these things and the only way to be certain anything will convert better is to test it.

            So I'm not sure your dream is possible in reality.

            Marcia Yudkin
            I was thinking the same thing.

            The best anyone can do is try to improve. No one can be absolutely certain.

            If it was possible to be certain there would be no need to test.

            However, any coach would need to be good enough to know the difference between what could work better and what may not.
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            • Profile picture of the author Irish Intuition
              I think I would want my ass kicked (which is tough for busy copywriters).

              I like the idea of reading something or being assigned something, then be
              'graded' on it.... not allowed to move on. Too many of us get bored with
              key parts of good copywriting essentials (IMHO), then we skip to the
              'good stuff'.

              Information overload and a passive nature stalls me at times. I respond
              well to those I respect as I do not want to embarrass me or them.

              When I am learning on my own I don't do so well.

              Hope that helps, amigo
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              • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
                Hi Marsha,

                When it comes to extraordinary coaching, Yoda, Luke (and R2D2) express my feelings in the matter better than I ever could.


                - Rick Duris
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                • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
                  Here is another angle to add to the mix in regard to seeking the perfect coach.

                  It comes from a relationship coach. She had a woman come in to seek help.
                  She was single and complained she couldn't find the right man.
                  The coach asked her what she wanted in a man and so she pulled out her
                  notebook and reeled off this great big list.

                  The relationship coach in shock said "My goodness, that sounds like a God,,,
                  ...would he want you?!"

                  Next point: Even the great Drayton Bird doesn't know all the answers.

                  Here's what I mean. When he was running a multi branch ad agency one
                  of the managers come to him for help as one of the campaigns bombed.

                  First words out of his mouth were "I don't know."

                  Just something to add to the melting pot.

                  All the best,
                  Ewen
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  • Profile picture of the author ericthered
    Brother Raybould,

    Lots of assignments (actual writing), with none too gentle critiques.

    With maybe the final assignment to write the copy for our own website - to sell
    copywriting services.

    Also as others have said, direction on getting and negotiating with clients. Though the "getting" part goes hand-in-hand with the craft, by definition. -no?

    Eric
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    • Profile picture of the author virginiad
      Hi

      I was intrigued by your question. I am not a copywriter; this is my first visit to this forum. I am taking John Carlton's SWS course this fall to help in my own business, and want to learn as much as I can.

      I would say that I would want a coach who doesn't so much critique my copy but teaches me how to write it myself. If I am always having you tell me what to change, it doesn't really help that much, because what do I do when you aren't around?

      I used to teach horseback riding, and they always said that the best teachers are those who were not "naturals", meaning that they had to learn every little thing. Those were the ones that could then explain "every little thing" to their students. A lot of times the "naturals" really didn't know the nuts and bolts and therefore couldn't explain things very well.

      If I were coaching, I would base the course on teaching the nuts and bolts and then forcing my students to do their own critiques...and doing critiques of the rest of the students...with guidance but not answers from me.

      Kind of like a socratic approach. Lots of questions and force the students to come up with the answers.

      Hope my ramblings are of help.

      Virginia
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    • Profile picture of the author David Raybould
      Originally Posted by ericthered View Post

      Brother Raybould,

      Lots of assignments (actual writing), with none too gentle critiques.

      With maybe the final assignment to write the copy for our own website - to sell
      copywriting services.

      Also as others have said, direction on getting and negotiating with clients. Though the "getting" part goes hand-in-hand with the craft, by definition. -no?

      Eric
      Brother Eric!

      How are you sir?

      It's been 4 months and I only
      just saw this post, so sorry!

      What's cooking my man?

      -David Raybould
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  • Profile picture of the author RefundHost
    1 - Someone who WRITES better copy than me.

    2 - Someone who knows how to TEST copy better than me.

    3 - Someone who can show me more ways to get traffic to that offer
    through mini-ads on various web properties.
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  • Profile picture of the author clever7
    I would like to learn how to easily find customers.

    I would also like to learn many interesting and totally different writing techniques
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