Honest Feedbacks Are Appreciated!

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Hey all,

I am sorry if this is wrong section to post this.

I am new to blogging world with wordpress, and i want honest feedbacks to my site about everything.

The link is in my signature, honest ones are appreciated.

Thanks a bunch in advance!

S.
#appreciated #feedbacks #honest
  • Profile picture of the author mike.joes
    Nice site mate, looking really good
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    • Profile picture of the author jtunkelo
      A couple of quick suggestions that should immediately make this convert better:

      - Make it clear what you're offering and to whom. The easiest way to do this is with a headline, which is what you're currently missing.

      - Make it clear what your specialty is. The whole language / localization / internationalization space is filled with different kinds of specialists. Make it clear what they're getting. Profile yourself using your real life story. The space is very crowded; make it easy for your prospects to choose you over others.

      - Add a little personality; people buy from people even when it's business to business.

      With these three things in place, I bet your stick rate becomes a lot better, and then you can really focus on conversion.

      Hope this helps.
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  • Profile picture of the author seosuperstar2014
    design is very attractive, but its very slow in loading. It may be problem at my side, please can anyone confirm it?
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  • Profile picture of the author pethanks
    Nice start for you as a beginner. Keep it up. You can also study more about website development. Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author nujrem23
    For me its good! It's simple but looks nice.
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    • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
      1. All the historical details are irrelevant. The stats are good, but they could be way better. Get a hold of the census data or hire a researcher.

      2. The title "Sell It in Spanish" makes you look like translation firm, not a marketing agency.

      3. Marketing-wise, I think you need a special report. I think you really need to spell out in detail why marketing to the Hispanic and Latino population in the US is rapidly becoming a must.

      (The guy to write that signature piece is Gustavo Arellano. Ask A Mexican! Beware, the man has a wicked sense of humor.)

      - Rick Duris

      PS: Years ago, I attended a Brian Tracy seminar. He insisted that everybody should learn Spanish as a second language.

      PPS: When California gubernatorial candidates are translating their messages into Spanish, you know something is up.

      PPPS: How much Spanish do I know? Muy poquito.
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      • Profile picture of the author Phantomwriter
        Its not clear what you do, until one takes time to read the whole text. Make it clear from the beginning!
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  • Profile picture of the author Summer1
    Thank you all! Sorry for the late reply. I will look into your suggestions.
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