Am I on the right track or should I give it up?

by davidkimball Posted: 14 years ago 2 replies

I appreciate all of your comments and help and figured I needed to outsource my weaknesses and play to my strengths.

This post has been deleted as I do not want Google to index it and my client find it at some point.

Again, thank you all for your confirmation and honesty. I thought that since I could write articles well, copywriting would come naturally. Uh, nope. Very hard work and those who do it well are commended and I will be glad to pay just as I work to have others pay me for my unique talents.

#copywriting #give #track

J. Barry Mandel 14 years ago

Hi David,

It's actually terrible

There is nothing motivating about what you wrote and most people will pass over it....quickly.

You need to connect to your market and show them that you understand them which you have not successfully done.

If you are under the gun to get this to happen then DO NOT send it out and hire a pro to help you.

Best of Luck,

Justin

P.S. If you want to hire probably the very best copywriter for your niche then look no further then fellow warrior Mike Humphrey's

P.P.S. This is my niche too so feel free to reach out to me as well if you'd like to
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- RickDuris 14 years ago
  
  Unfortunately, your's is a mess. Hire Mike if he's available.
  
  - Rick Duris
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Am I on the right track or should I give it up?

davidkimball • 14 years ago • 2 replies

I appreciate all of your comments and help and figured I needed to outsource my weaknesses and play to my strengths. This post has been deleted as I do not want Google to index it and my client find it at some point.