Could You Plz Spare Your Valuable Time To Help Me In Increasing Conversions?

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I have a site in the reverse phone lookup niche and am driving very targeted traffic to it. But my conversions are low compared to the fact that these are super targeted traffic. I seek help from this community to suggest me some changes which could probably help increase my conversions. The url is www(dot)reversephonecenter(dot)info (sorry, I have low post count, so cannot post live links)

I understand that you will be spending some amount of your valuable time in analysing. So I thank in advance to all those who want to help me out.

Tamas
#conversions #increasing #plz #spare #time #valuable
  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    no sales letter

    no reason to buy

    no nothing

    needs redesign

    complete an sales letter.

    I can and will help you send me an email?


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  • Profile picture of the author true_promote
    I don't think that this particular niche needs any kind of sales letter. Plz see other sites in the same niche, they are absolutely the same type of comparison review sites.
    Do you still think it needs a sales page? I appreciate for your feedback.
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  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    Nothing on the site speaks to me as a potential client.

    Their is no communication..... Just adverts

    This does nothing for me
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  • Profile picture of the author true_promote
    oh i see. Maybe I have to hit you an email. what's your id?
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  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    It is on the sig file


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  • Profile picture of the author true_promote
    sent you an email.
    I am waiting to hear other's opinion too.
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    • Profile picture of the author Oxbloom
      My impressions:

      1) I don't think you really need a sales letter. You just need a nice, clean design, and a nice, friendly interface.

      2) I instantly distrust your site as a source of "reviews", since you feature a "free preview" from your "top rated" site, right at the top of your page. You come across as less of an authority, and more of a shill for that particular service.

      3) In the off chance I didn't distrust you for that reason, I certainly would after TRYING the "free preview." You promise me I'll be able to find "anybody's address, name, + more...instantly," as part of my "free preview." Turns out to be a load of bollocks. I enter a number, and get a sales pitch...nothing more.


      If you want to look like an impartial authority on reverse lookup services, use your headline to tout that...or a related benefit the consumer gets from that service. Don't lie to your prospect outright.

      Then, maybe give a quick review...even just a couple bullet points...for the services. The reviews can be based on the customer reviews, or on what you know to be true about them.

      The top part of the page can still be dedicated to your featured service. Throw your headline up there, give a quick sentence or two on your mission as a website. Then, on to the pitch. "Enter a number below to find out what our top rated service can do for you," for example. And right under that, a big "#1" or gold star graphic or whatever, along with a little bolded blurb/set of bullet points talking about the great features of that service.

      Down below, shorter, less prominent reviews of the services you're not promoting as hard.

      Anyway, just some ideas.
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  • Profile picture of the author true_promote
    thanks oxbloom for your advice. I will keep in mind all these points during redesigning.
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    • Profile picture of the author ShellServe
      Originally Posted by true_promote View Post

      thanks oxbloom for your advice. I will keep in mind all these points during redesigning.
      In my personal opinion. What you need is to put in some "urgency" so traffic can really be converted. Typical review page is not working anymore at least for me.
      Action button/link should be bold.

      btw,

      whats the conversition rate for this page?
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      • Profile picture of the author jasondinner
        I made this quick video with Jing to show you some things you can do right now to increase the conversion on your page.

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        • Profile picture of the author ShellServe
          Originally Posted by jasondinner View Post

          I made this quick video with Jing to show you some things you can do right now to increase the conversion on your page.
          Thank for this video. I learned something from you
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          • Profile picture of the author jasondinner
            Originally Posted by ShellServe View Post

            Thank for this video. I learned something from you
            Anytime Glad you found it helpful!!
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  • Profile picture of the author true_promote
    Thanks Jason,
    i really appreciate the time you spent for commenting on my LP. There are quite a good things to be learnt from this video!
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    • Profile picture of the author jasondinner
      Anytime true_promote

      Let us know if your conversions improved after you made some of the changes.

      - Jason
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