Is this good copy for my Donation page?

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Hi. I wanted to get a better copy for my donation page. I currently made $21 off of it in a month which is cool, but I want to make loads more.

My current Donate copy on the page says:

I decided to try something different and hope that this brings in loads more donations. Here is what I wrote:

Is it good copy that would make you donate? Anything needs to be changed or anything I need to add to it so that it will get me more donations?
#copywriting #copy #donation #good #page
  • you are very funny
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    • OK what is up with people saying I'm funny? Is it the way I look or what?

      I want to be taken serious.
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  • Being taken seriously and wanting to be the very first Earth Emperor don't seem to be compatible. You kind of remind me of Napoleon Dynamite though and people took him seriously, didn't they?
  • No it's not about your look , it's about the your ideas Your funny
  • hehehe dmitry is right , you could use it as a marketing weapon
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    • Well then... GIVE ME MY FIRST THANKS! :-*
  • Very nice. I know the same tactic won't work for me, but I like it!
  • OK here is my donation page. Let me know if it's OK.

    Donate | Earth Emperor

    I also updated the sidebar under "DONATE". Let me know if that is OK.

    Thank you.
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    • Oh boy, the headline possibilities of this are great. Lets see...



      or..

      or...


      Maybe You Just Want to be Chief of Your OWN Private Island?



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