Help me re write my sale email please
Or give me some pointers?
When i sent out the link to sales page originally i had more than half my list buy. So i wrote an email and set it up as an auto responder to my list subscribers (email number 3 in a chain, first two offering valuable and free information). And i get almost zero conversions.
Remember that the topic is for subscribers to a tutorial website on a specific synth.
Any tips would be very much appreciated
Thanks in advance for your time.
Here is the current email
Hey X,
I hope you have found my blog xxxxxx.com helpful!
I try to add two or three new tutorials every week so keep
checking back for more info.
Over the next couple of weeks i have some great tutorials for
you including tutorials on using the routing feature, the bypass
function (awesome for sound design!) as well as tutorials on the
band reject filter for sweeps and how to use the Insert effects
amongst others!
I'd like to say thank you for your support in subscribing to my
blog, i'd like to offer you a 50 % discount on my product XXX.
The normal price is $24 but as a subscriber, and to say thanks
for supporting, you can have XXX for only $12!
Click this link below to have a listen some samples of these patches.
This offer is available to you by clicking this link
http://www.xxxxxx.com/offer
Thank you for supporting my blog, and I'll be in touch soon with
the first part in a tutorial about the routing capabilities of XXXXX!
Don't look to MAKE money - look to HELP people and you will make all the money you can ever want.
Don't have the time to write emails that will get opened, read and your reader to take action then leave me a message. I will get back to you within 48 hrs.
Don't look to MAKE money - look to HELP people and you will make all the money you can ever want.
Don't look to MAKE money - look to HELP people and you will make all the money you can ever want.
Don't look to MAKE money - look to HELP people and you will make all the money you can ever want.