Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

13 years ago

Didn't you ask for help a few days ago?

You didn't make any of the changes suggested either... lol. And how many copywriters do you think are pregnant on the Warrior Forum?

Just curious.

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barakos9

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Dean Jackson

Didn't you ask for help a few days ago?

You didn't make any of the changes suggested either... lol. And how many copywriters do you think are pregnant on the Warrior Forum?

Just curious.

- Dean

I've decided not to make any of the changed suggested since my
new writer will create a totally new copy so why even bothering..

i didn't say the writer must be pregnant but it's a serious advantage if she is..
every mom to be or fresh mom could get the project.

i am not asking for help here , i am looking for a professional that can deliver results.

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John_S

13 years ago

that will force people pull out their credit cards

That's one red flag, right there.

the copy is fine

That's two.

Why not go for number three: Budget?

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wcmylife

13 years ago

What's the budget on this one?

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Paul Hooper-Kelly 13 years ago

Hi barakos9,

You might just have hit on something here.

Thinking back, I wrote a sales letter for a client, selling a info product on writing the perfect 'Father Of The Bride' speech - just when I was writing my own speech for my daughter's big day.

And that hit #1 on ClickBank.

So it certainly helps to put yourself in the shoes of the prospect.

Sorry I can't help. I've just checked - but it's no dice.

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Paul
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- Ross Bowring 13 years ago
  
  A married male copywriter would be fine for this job. When a woman is pregnant she's not shy about telling you exactly how she feels.
  
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  Mike Schwenk 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Ross Bowring
  
  A married male copywriter would be fine for this job. When a woman is pregnant she's not shy about telling you exactly how she feels.
  
  --- Ross
  
  I agree with Ross.
  
  Try to keep an open mind while looking for someone to work with.
  
  Any male copywriter that has been around to aid his wife through 8-9 months of pregnancy, can certainly empathize with your female readers.
  
  Also, and I might be wrong here... but if you're looking to make a few changes while waiting for someone to hire, I would start with your headline.
  
  While it might be good in some cases to sell based on price... I think reminding a pregnant woman, who is already going through a lot, about all of the bills that will be piling up...probably isn't the best route to go.
  
  I realize you're saying so to offer a solution, but to me it sounds like:
  "Hey, I know you're going to be spending a lot of money on your baby...but give me some anyway."
  
  Don't just get try to get her to agree with something, relate to her on her current state:
  
  Between the backaches...the fatigue...the morning sickness and everything else that comes with being pregnant, don't you have enough to worry about?
  
  I would focus more on the benefits of capturing all of the memories throughout her pregnancy.
  
  Right now, it's just about what your book includes... not what the ultimate benefit of knowing that information would be.
  
  And while we're at it... what kind of equipment does your book suggest? Because it sounds like it will require investing in as much equipment as it would cost to just hire a professional.
  
  If it were my book... I wouldn't completely position it as a cheaper solution, but as a means of capturing those precious moments.
  
  Just my two cents.
  
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  MikeHumphreys 13 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Ross Bowring
  
  A married male copywriter would be fine for this job. When a woman is pregnant she's not shy about telling you exactly how she feels.
  
  --- Ross
  
  I'm not interested in this project but I do agree with Ross's point. Some of the married male copywriters I know have been through more than pregnancy. I'm sure there's some female copywriters who are "veteran" moms and could knock this project out of the park as well.
  
  To this day, some of my best "marital blackmail" stories on things my wife said or did happened when she was pregnant.
  
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barakos9

13 years ago

Thank you all for your comments.

But still, i think pregnant women will be the best choice. She’s the only one knows the
Exact filling of a woman in her pregnancy and how to convince her she need to buy it.

of course that i am not disqualifying other writers that can do the job , but my number 1
priority is a pregnancy writer....if there is no such thing here anything near that will be fine..

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burnbebe

13 years ago

Honestly, I don't think pregnant women are the best choice. Especially not first-time mothers. They are emotional, moody, scared and anxious, and yes, somebody said that pregnant women are not ashamed to say what they think. You will need an experienced mother. Pregnant women take advice and listen to more experienced mothers. If you want to sell something to pregnant women, then let the more sure, more experienced and the been-there-done-that-so-I-know-just-what-you-want-and-need people: the mothers. And yes, experienced fathers are a great choice, too. Women do listen to men who are sensitive enough to know and understand what the are going through.

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Hugh Thyer 13 years ago

A pregnant copywriter might decide not to finish it, and rip your head off if you complain.

Oops, did I say that out loud?
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Jacqueline Smith

13 years ago

Okay guys....I do try and bite my tongue most of the time but....

We have another human being growing inside of us that will have to come out one day!!!! We are entitled to be moody and demanding!

Just had to say it

And.....pregnant or not, women aren't afraid to say what they think because we're always right :p

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barakos9 13 years ago

ok guys , i get the point.

Actually i am now open minded for other people (not only pregnant women’s)

now! before i decide with which writer i should move on, i have question to ask..
do you think the writer who wrote the copy should polish the copy (on going) until it sell..

i know most of you will say ....depends on the traffic and product...so on.
this site will have about 10k visitors (monthly) from organic search...
so i have to know that the writer i am hiring for this job will help me out up until we find the right "formula" that will sell like crazy..

otherwise , i really don't understand how buying your copy can bring a big success.
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Ross Bowring

13 years ago

Originally Posted by Jacqueline Smith

Okay guys....I do try and bite my tongue most of the time but....

We have another human being growing inside of us that will have to come out one day!!!! We are entitled to be moody and demanding!

Just had to say it

And.....pregnant or not, women aren't afraid to say what they think because we're always right :p

Absolutely... anyone who performs the equivalent of pooping a grapefruit has my deepest respect.

--- Ross

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burnbebe

13 years ago

I think your writer can do revisions to constantly update the content. There's nothing wrong with that. As long as you are clear about the kind of "polishing" or revision needed, that's fair enough.

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Paul Hooper-Kelly

13 years ago

Hi Barak,

Like Mike, I'm not interested in doing this project, either.

But I would say that if you hire a professional copywriter you can expect to receive a properly researched and written sales letter, that does not need constant fiddling, other than - perhaps - split testing of headline or other variables, supplied as part of the original package by the copywriter.

Of course, if you suffer from the - sadly - incurable disease of alterationitis (an irresistible urge to 'improve' a copywriter's sales copy), you'll quickly discover why it's a standing joke in copywriting circles.

It's because the disease infects the sales letter, reducing the effectiveness of the original to about 70%.

Warmest regards,

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RickDuris

13 years ago

Hi Barak,

Allow me to give you some ideas.

I bounced your project off a photographer Client of mine. She does amazing maternity photos.

The photos which your buyers are looking for are all about capturing a moment. They're intimate. They're candid. They're deeply personal.

To the woman, she said, "it's all about capturing that one priceless moment that reveals the relationship between mother and unborn child."

That sounds very elitist, I suspect. But I submit your buyers may be looking for the same.

One last thing. The posing makes a huge difference. What you may want to consider in your project is a bonus on the best maternity poses. If you do the research, I'm sure you can find appropriate samples and build a product around that.

With my friend the photographer, she has the posing down to a science. And what's amazing is she takes very few pictures. Maybe 10. But the ones she does are beautiful.

- Rick Duris

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Ross Bowring 13 years ago

Quick aside... the second letter in the report in my sig is all about maternity photos, etc...

At the very least you'll read it and think "this doesn't help me at all, what a waste of time..."

--- Ross
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barakos9

13 years ago

Originally Posted by RickDuris

Hi Barak,

Allow me to give you some ideas.

I bounced your project off a photographer Client of mine. She does amazing maternity photos.

The photos which your buyers are looking for are all about capturing a moment. They're intimate. They're candid. They're deeply personal.

To the woman, she said, "it's all about capturing that one priceless moment that reveals the relationship between mother and unborn child."

That sounds very elitist, I suspect. But I submit your buyers may be looking for the same.

One last thing. The posing makes a huge difference. What you may want to consider in your project is a bonus on the best maternity poses. If you do the research, I'm sure you can find appropriate samples and build a product around that.

With my friend the photographer, she has the posing down to a science. And what's amazing is she takes very few pictures. Maybe 10. But the ones she does are beautiful.

- Rick Duris

Thanks Rick, I really appreciate your practical comments...

Thank you all guys, I am thankful for your help and time & efforts while reviewing my copy.

Best Regards,

Barak

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RickDuris

13 years ago

Hi Barak,

If you have additional questions which you'd like answers to, I'd be happy to ask my Client on your behalf. While I am not a position share my Client's info, I can get the information you need.

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barakos9

13 years ago

Originally Posted by RickDuris

Hi Barak,

If you have additional questions which you'd like answers to, I'd be happy to ask my Client on your behalf. While I am not a position share my Client's info, I can get the information you need.

- Rick Duris

Hi Rick,

I am going to implement your suggestion (free bonus)

i will be happy if you can review my audio testimony and advice whether i should keep it ? Also i was thinking about video testimony, please tell me if that can help or harm the copy.

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