Please Rate my Video Squeeze Page

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Hey guys, this is a Network marketing niche landing page.

Let me know what you think and if the video engages you.

Massive MLM Leads


Thanks in advance.
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  • Profile picture of the author HassanAjmal
    Also, please note the Hook of my video, is it strong? (the first slide page)

    For background, This is for network marketers who are failing doing things the traditional way(pitching family and friends,etc..)
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  • Profile picture of the author chapdaddy
    I damn near put my email in... I think it's a very well crafted video.
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    • Hi Hassan,

      Yup, I agree with chapdaddy, it's a good video.

      You could improve the impact of the headline by putting it in red.

      Also, in the opening sequence you could add some more about the good life that awaits them when they've 'cracked the MLM code' (with the help of your product).

      You see, deciding to buy is an emotional decision.

      So by showing them what the money will DO for them in concrete terms: the fancy car ... the luxury vacations ... the dream home ... the admiration of their friends and loved ones, you will really tickle their emotional hot buttons into a buying frenzy.

      Warmest regards,

      Paul
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      • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
        I think you should run with it. Good job! - Rick Duris
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        • Profile picture of the author zombiewarrior
          I'm impressed! Looks very pro. I would also recommend adding some red to the headline to make it "pop" a little more.

          Also, if you don't mind me asking, where can I purchase that pack of images that has all the little bright-white 3d figures that are doing different things related to marketing (that you use in your video, for example)? I've hunted everywhere, but I'm not sure how to go about finding them! lol
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          • Profile picture of the author HassanAjmal
            Originally Posted by zombiewarrior View Post

            I'm impressed! Looks very pro. I would also recommend adding some red to the headline to make it "pop" a little more.

            Also, if you don't mind me asking, where can I purchase that pack of images that has all the little bright-white 3d figures that are doing different things related to marketing (that you use in your video, for example)? I've hunted everywhere, but I'm not sure how to go about finding them! lol

            Oh simple, go to istockphoto.com. Type thing like 3d write, or 3d sad. Those little guys will come up. There is one author named koun or something like that, favorite him.. he makes all the good stuff.
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  • Profile picture of the author Bryan Waldo
    Hey quick question did u rip that music sound track from Anik Singals video? Other than that the Video is fantastic. Nice Job
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  • Profile picture of the author sarahberra
    Great video. It seems like you know what you're doing!
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris G
    Looks really good. I agree with zombiewarrior up above about adding some red in the title to give it some "pop"!
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  • Profile picture of the author DrMeg
    Hassan,
    Great job. You almost made me want to get back into MLM! I loved the part about the journey of Sorrow! You are hitting all the right buttons for frustrated MLMers. You should do great with this.
    I also agree about changing the headline to red or even bright blue.
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  • Profile picture of the author Gloria Joseph
    it looks good to me. The speaker is loud.
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  • Profile picture of the author Zero
    I like it. I'm really tempted to opt-in.

    Did u do all of it yourself?

    PS:
    Removin the name field is somethin u may wanna try sometime....see if tat boosts ur conversions or not..
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  • Profile picture of the author WickedWally


    There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

    Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

    Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

    Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

    Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

    Booster 2: Testimonials...

    Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.


    Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

    You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

    By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

    People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

    Make sure they know what they are getting.

    Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

    Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

    Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

    Nuff said. Get to it H.

    P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.
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    • Profile picture of the author Zero
      Originally Posted by WickedWally View Post


      There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

      Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

      Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

      Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

      Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

      Booster 2: Testimonials...

      Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.


      Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

      You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

      By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

      People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

      Make sure they know what they are getting.

      Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

      Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

      Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

      Nuff said. Get to it H.

      P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.
      why would he want testimonials on a page designed to get an opt-in?
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      • Profile picture of the author WickedWally
        Originally Posted by Zero View Post

        why would he want testimonials on a page designed to get an opt-in?
        You need brain surgery.

        (See attached.)

        Its from Marketing Sherpa.

        Nuff said.





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        • Profile picture of the author Zero
          Originally Posted by WickedWally View Post

          You need brain surgery.

          (See attached.)

          Its from Marketing Sherpa.

          Nuff said.




          Oh right I see. I guess I'll try that as well.

          Thanks.
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    • Profile picture of the author HassanAjmal
      Originally Posted by WickedWally View Post


      There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

      Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

      Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

      Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

      Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

      Booster 2: Testimonials...

      Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.


      Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

      You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

      By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

      People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

      Make sure they know what they are getting.

      Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

      Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

      Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

      Nuff said. Get to it H.

      P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.
      Thanks for the ideas.
      Also, the testimonials... right under the videos okay?
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  • Profile picture of the author julesw
    i recognise those graphics, the exact music track and the tone..


    you must have done The Video Boss course?

    nice video
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    • Profile picture of the author HassanAjmal
      Originally Posted by julesw View Post

      i recognise those graphics, the exact music track and the tone..


      you must have done The Video Boss course?

      nice video

      Yes it was video boss.
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      • Profile picture of the author zombiewarrior
        Originally Posted by HassanAjmal View Post

        Yes it was video boss.
        Video Boss helped you create your video? I'm very impressed, I'm gonna have to look into that! Again, great work =)
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  • Profile picture of the author WickedWally
    Also, the testimonials... right under the videos okay?
    Yea.

    123456
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