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14 years ago

Also, please note the Hook of my video, is it strong? (the first slide page)

For background, This is for network marketers who are failing doing things the traditional way(pitching family and friends,etc..)

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chapdaddy

14 years ago

I damn near put my email in... I think it's a very well crafted video.

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Paul Hooper-Kelly

14 years ago

Hi Hassan,

Yup, I agree with chapdaddy, it's a good video.

You could improve the impact of the headline by putting it in red.

Also, in the opening sequence you could add some more about the good life that awaits them when they've 'cracked the MLM code' (with the help of your product).

You see, deciding to buy is an emotional decision.

So by showing them what the money will DO for them in concrete terms: the fancy car ... the luxury vacations ... the dream home ... the admiration of their friends and loved ones, you will really tickle their emotional hot buttons into a buying frenzy.

Warmest regards,

Paul

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RickDuris

14 years ago

I think you should run with it. Good job! - Rick Duris

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zombiewarrior

14 years ago

I'm impressed! Looks very pro. I would also recommend adding some red to the headline to make it "pop" a little more.

Also, if you don't mind me asking, where can I purchase that pack of images that has all the little bright-white 3d figures that are doing different things related to marketing (that you use in your video, for example)? I've hunted everywhere, but I'm not sure how to go about finding them! lol

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HassanAjmal

14 years ago

Originally Posted by zombiewarrior

I'm impressed! Looks very pro. I would also recommend adding some red to the headline to make it "pop" a little more.

Also, if you don't mind me asking, where can I purchase that pack of images that has all the little bright-white 3d figures that are doing different things related to marketing (that you use in your video, for example)? I've hunted everywhere, but I'm not sure how to go about finding them! lol

Oh simple, go to istockphoto.com. Type thing like 3d write, or 3d sad. Those little guys will come up. There is one author named koun or something like that, favorite him.. he makes all the good stuff.

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HassanAjmal 14 years ago

thank you very much guys and gals.
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- zombiewarrior 14 years ago
  
  Thanks a lot Hassan, I'll do that!
  
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Bryan Waldo

14 years ago

Hey quick question did u rip that music sound track from Anik Singals video? Other than that the Video is fantastic. Nice Job

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sarahberra

14 years ago

Great video. It seems like you know what you're doing!

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Chris G

14 years ago

Looks really good. I agree with zombiewarrior up above about adding some red in the title to give it some "pop"!

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DrMeg

14 years ago

Hassan,
Great job. You almost made me want to get back into MLM! I loved the part about the journey of Sorrow! You are hitting all the right buttons for frustrated MLMers. You should do great with this.
I also agree about changing the headline to red or even bright blue.

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Gloria Joseph

14 years ago

it looks good to me. The speaker is loud.

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Zero

14 years ago

I like it. I'm really tempted to opt-in.

Did u do all of it yourself?

PS:
Removin the name field is somethin u may wanna try sometime....see if tat boosts ur conversions or not..

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WickedWally

14 years ago

There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

Booster 2: Testimonials...

Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.

Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

Make sure they know what they are getting.

Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

Nuff said. Get to it H.

P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.

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Zero

14 years ago

Originally Posted by WickedWally

There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

Booster 2: Testimonials...

Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.

Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

Make sure they know what they are getting.

Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

Nuff said. Get to it H.

P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.

why would he want testimonials on a page designed to get an opt-in?

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WickedWally 14 years ago

Originally Posted by Zero

why would he want testimonials on a page designed to get an opt-in?

You need brain surgery.

(See attached.)

Its from Marketing Sherpa.

Nuff said.
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- Zero 14 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by WickedWally
  
  You need brain surgery.
  
  (See attached.)
  
  Its from Marketing Sherpa.
  
  Nuff said.
  
  Oh right I see. I guess I'll try that as well.
  
  Thanks.
  
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HassanAjmal

14 years ago

Originally Posted by WickedWally

There's a whole bunch of things you need to do to boost response.

Booster 1: Get A Logo From Free Privacy Policy

Go to freeprivacypolicy.com and register there, once successful paste it where you inserted the logo of the padlock.

Privacy policy link should be a small popup that's scrollable.

Not bringing them to another page where they can lose interest.

Booster 2: Testimonials...

Pump up your page with testimonials of people who've got your product and loved it.

Booster 3: Your eCover Above The Arrows

You'll want to remind people what they are getting.

By the time they watch the whole video, they'll forget about everything they're getting.

People have short memories, don't "hope" they'll remember what they are getting.

Make sure they know what they are getting.

Booster 4: How Many People Are Already In

Let the new visitors know that there are already 4,432 readers on your list who have opted in.

Don't discount the awesome power of a social proof.

Nuff said. Get to it H.

P.S.: Change your page and let me know how much more optins you got.

Thanks for the ideas.
Also, the testimonials... right under the videos okay?

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julesw

14 years ago

i recognise those graphics, the exact music track and the tone..

you must have done The Video Boss course?

nice video

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HassanAjmal 14 years ago

Originally Posted by julesw

i recognise those graphics, the exact music track and the tone..

you must have done The Video Boss course?

nice video

Yes it was video boss.
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- zombiewarrior 14 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by HassanAjmal
  
  Yes it was video boss.
  
  Video Boss helped you create your video? I'm very impressed, I'm gonna have to look into that! Again, great work =)
  
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WickedWally

14 years ago

Also, the testimonials... right under the videos okay?

Yea.

123456

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