Sales Letter Critique - Too Wordy?
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I asked a few colleagues to take a look and give me their thoughts. Some were blown away.
However, others have told me things like "Dude, no one will even understand the words you're using!"
I beg to differ. I think most people in the Internet marketing industry appreciate well-articulated, professional quality sales pages, especially contrasted against the usual fare of barely telling you anything about their actual product, and just going on about how it's a magical money button.
(I almost feel like I revealed too much about the system on that page, but I wanted to help people out and be totally honest. Anyone with decent marketing knowledge could make a ton of money just from the free info there.)
What do you think? Am I being too much of a mad scientist? Do I really need to "dumb it down" for those who don't possess an expansive vocabulary?
Being well-versed in your own language is an essential asset in my eyes, but who knows, maybe being too fancy would hurt sales?
As always, thanks for your input.
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