Please critque my new copy (updated, again! :P )
Let me say thanks beforehand. You guys are helping me beyond what I thought anyone could!! I really appreciate the time you guys are taking. Hopefully I can repay the favor at some point!
I updated the sales copy using a new theme and such.
www.preventtype2diabetes.com
I like the way it looks a lot better. I changed the title and attempted to use the biggest benefits and put them in the headline. I also tried to sync with the sufferer in the begining.
I still feel like I am missing a lot, though I am getting closer!
I feel like reversing this deadly disease should pop out more, but I cant seem to figure out how. Still researching on this point.
What do you think so far?
Thanks again! Really appreciate it!!!!!!!!
Virginia Drew
Virginia Drew
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