Can I ask, yet again, if you can glance at my copy and offer any critque? I changed it a lot based on past reviews and am thankfull for all of them. I am still making sure I corrected what was not right last time.
I focused on medication release as this seems to hit home the most. Those who fear they will need to use medication for the rest of their life. I also created my USP by focusing on the underlying inflammation.
I couldnt change the font for some reason still... (its a wordpress page)