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it's a guide for women to understand men and to improve relationships.
what i have:
-3 audio interviews
-how to order video instructions
this is my first sales copy that i've written, modeling after a successful cb sales page.
this offer will be sent to 10,000 subscribers (mostly women) from an affiliate as of tomorrow.
since his subscribers list is from an email software that doesn't track like aweber. i cannot track open rates, click rates, purchases, etc...
hopefully it will go well...
please help me out by:
1. critiquing sales copy
2. pointing out what needs to be revised, edited, taken out, added.
will update stats by the end of the week...