32% conversion rate... Critique required
Blast 1:
Subject:
Turning your pictures into masterpieces...with #productname!
Copy:
"Do you remember the last time you took a trip and was amazed at the beauty of the scenery... and it was so incredible that you just had to take out your camera and capture that magnificent view... only to come home to upload the picture to your computer, to find that what you got was a flat, dull looking... even boring picture of that great place?
I know the feeling. Well, I used to know the feeling.
You see, I knew there had to be a way to process my pictures that would allow me to recreate that delicious, fascinating view of that memorable trip.
And it turns out I did find it...
Is called #productname from the guys at #productmaker
I mean... with just one click is like going back in time and experience in full, vivid color detail, what a magnificent view that was. Is just... astonishing.
In case you haven't seen it, take a look at what can be done right now
Your family will love you for it!
Hope you enjoy improving your pictures with the amazing power of #productname
Until the next time... thanks for reading!
Signature"
Stats:
64% opens
32% CTR
This email blast generated well over 1k for me in less than a week.
Blast 2:
Subject:
Private lessons for the #technique Master, #nameofmaster!
Copy:
Dear fellow photographer,
You need to pay close attention to this... this email can seriously boost your photography skills.
#nameofmaster, World #technique guru, has just made available for immediate download his exclusive #technique DVD series for the incredible price of $99!
Let me repeat that:
For $99 you have immediate access to the secrets of #technique photography by the master of #technique, #nameofmaster!
Think about it for a second...
This is a once in a lifetime opportunity to have #nameofmaster, the creator of #internetproperty, in your living room teaching you the inner workings of #technique photography for less than 0.20 cents a day!
I have just purchased it and all I can say is WOW! This Christmas sure are going to be colorful :-)
Check out #nameofmaster website for more information about the DVD and the different versions you have available.
Click here to download the world class #technique DVD from the master himself, #nameofmaster!
Until the next time, thanks for reading!
Stats:
53% opens
24% CTR
This email blast generated near 1k for me in about two weeks.
The reason I'm posting this here is two fold:
- I looking for critiques
- I want to get in the copywriting business but have no idea what should I charge being a ghost and all
Fire away!
Thanks,
Webghost
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