Gary Halbert's Direct Marketing "Course"

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First, I am not a copywriter although I am working at getting good enough to at least "right" a compelling sales letter. That appears to be as much psychology as writing skills.

I've been going through the Gary Halbert Newsletter Archives (especially the Boron Letters) and find them fascinating.

Halbert Newsletter Archives

One of the Newsletters gives what he considered to be a way to write copy better than a lot of what you might pay for in:

The Gary Halbert Letter

I'm disappointed in that it appears to actually take some work . But I am curious what other copywriters here think of his advice as it seems pretty sound to me.

Marvin
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  • Profile picture of the author Zero
    I'm no copywriter ( I am learning) but i tink its safe to say u can take anythin the late great Gary Halbert says as Gospel truth in regards to writing copy. If he has laid out a way to write killer copy, then just do it. Don't question the advice he has given, you just do it.


    What he says is pretty standard stuff, that every great copywriter has done and does to become a great copywriter. Read those books, write out by hand, proven headlines and sales copies, ads etc

    I've been doing that stuff myself in bits and pieces, albiet in a very disorganized manner ( which will change in the New year). I've learnt that i must absolutely learn how to become good at writing copy if i'm to make it big time.
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    • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
      I'm not sure, but I suspect that writing things out by hand helps to understand and internalize the concepts.

      While my wife was watching the TV, I was listening to the commercials. Astounding! This time I was actually listening to the words, and they followed the same pattern that a lot of sales letters follow.

      This may be obvious to many, but it was the first time I actually heard the tactics being used.

      Maybe there is hope .

      Marvin
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      • Profile picture of the author Zentech
        Although I personally am not into "courses" and what-not, being more the "natural" type, Gary Halbert's as solid as they come and you really can't miss with anything he says. If he says to paint your face with chocolate pudding and shout "BADGERS" 50 times, there's probably a good reason and it will probably somehow make you a better writer.

        That being said, this goes only for giants like Halbert. There are a lot of imitators who give the same sort of advice, but because they ain't the real deal, it does absolutely nothing but waste your time and energy.

        One piece of advice I'd give (at the risk of being guilty of what I just warned you about) is to become an advertising cynic. Make dissecting every ad you see a way of life. Ingrain the examination of ads into your brain. This comes naturally to me because I happen to be a very cynical person in general. If it doesn't come naturally to you, then work on it until you are *automatically* taking every ad, every pitch, and even every piece of persuasive writing you see apart mentally and looking under the hood.

        But hey, I'm no Gary Halbert, and don't claim to be. If in doubt, do what he says and ignore me.
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        • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
          Many thanks for your comments; it sounds like it would not be wise to ignore what he is saying!

          Actually writing out by hand some of the ads he recommends seems like a strange request, but maybe that is just my "get it done" attitude leading me astray (again.) And I don't think learning from a master is a bad idea.

          While I rarely look at magazine ads, I'll take the new perspective and start to dissect them. Doing that for the first time to the TV commercial was something I'm still marveling about; I guess I may have a strange concept of fun.

          Marvin
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  • Profile picture of the author Hank Rearden
    Originally Posted by Marvin Johnston View Post

    First, I am not a copywriter although I am working at getting good enough to at least "right" a compelling sales letter. That appears to be as much psychology as writing skills.

    I've been going through the Gary Halbert Newsletter Archives (especially the Boron Letters) and find them fascinating.

    Halbert Newsletter Archives

    One of the Newsletters gives what he considered to be a way to write copy better than a lot of what you might pay for in:

    The Gary Halbert Letter

    I'm disappointed in that it appears to actually take some work . But I am curious what other copywriters here think of his advice as it seems pretty sound to me.

    Marvin
    If you do this, you will be a better technical copywriter than 98% of this forum.

    NOBODY does what he says in that post. N.o.b.o.d.y.

    Do it all, and you'll be a stronger copywriter than anyone a business owner can currently hire, online.

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  • Profile picture of the author Zentech
    "For the first time?" I don't mean to take a "tone" (I really don't), but you need to dissect about 5,000 ads before you're going to get a deep understanding of advertising. That's not an exaggeration - being a habitual dissector of everything persuasion-related and an incorrigible critical thinker, I'm sure I've mentally dissected way more ads than that in my lifetime.

    Writing out ads as Halbert suggests is definitely going to help you. If you've only recently started taking ads apart and looking under the hood to see what's going on psychologically, I'm sure it will do you a world of good. And, in between rounds of doing that, get a hold of a huge collection of classic ads (just Google it, there are several great sites) and start tearing them apart mentally every which way from Sunday.

    Figure out what makes people BUY. That's what you study ads for. It's something you need to understand not just intellectually, but on an automatic, intuitive level. You need to understand the psychology of advertising in your bones. And the psychology of advertising is no more and no less than the psychology of human beings in general. Anyone who does this can write copy even if they've never touched a book or a course.

    But again, ignore me in favor of Halbert, by all means. He's a giant and I'm just some guy on Warrior Forum. No doubt he knows all of this and concluded that having people write out ads by hand is the best way to get it done. Makes a lot of sense to me, especially if one hasn't spent a lifetime in the habit of tearing ads apart just for sport. And even if one has, it couldn't hurt. I'd be doing it myself if I cared about "moving up," although currently I really don't.
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by Zentech View Post

      "For the first time?" I don't mean to take a "tone" (I really don't), but you need to dissect about 5,000 ads before you're going to get a deep understanding of advertising. That's not an exaggeration - being a habitual dissector of everything persuasion-related and an incorrigible critical thinker, I'm sure I've mentally dissected way more ads than that in my lifetime.
      You've got to be kidding, right?

      At one ad a day, that's over 13 years. And it would take longer to dissect an ad than one day.

      I'm not just saying 'read', but 'dissect'.

      Unless you mean in a superficial way, in which case it defeats the object of dissecting. Doesn't it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Hank Rearden
    Goddamnit. The hand writing is for muscle memory and "magic."

    If you've never written these classics by hand, you do not understand this.

    If you have, you don't need me to explain it any further.

    This is not about dissection. This is about "magic."

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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      I'm going to fly against the prevailing wind here, and tell you to take all "absolute" advice with a dose of healthy skepticism.

      Writing out letters by hand is tied to how we develop muscle memory, and subsequently internalize those memories into our subconscious.

      Repetition is an essential part of developing muscle memory. However, mindless repetition is almost useless in developing superior skill sets.

      For example, have you ever watched a semi-truck negotiate its way through a crowded city street? With just inches to spare, the driver slips this huge vehicle through spaces that - to the casual onlooker - the truck can't possibly fit through.

      But they do.

      Or, to continue the driving analogy, I live in a city where parallel parking skills are rarely necessary. And watching residents attempt that exercise (usually in a space twice as large as they need) is generally hilarious.

      On the other hand, I used to live in NYC, where parallel parking is a survival skill. People squeeze their cars in and out of spaces with barely room for a sheet of paper between their bumpers, and the cars fore and aft of them.

      How did these drivers learn to drive and park with such precision? Yes, they practiced. More importantly, they practiced with focus.

      Simply writing out letter after letter is not going to turn you into a copy genius. However, writing carefully selected letters, understanding why that letter should be copied, and then 'imitiating' the flow and structure, will strengthen your copy skills immensely.

      You'll get more out of writing a few dozen letters with focus, than you will from hundreds of hours of mindless copying.

      What's more - with all due respect to Halbert - some of the advice of the gurus of old is now outdated in today's information-saturated, Internet, iPhone society.

      The basics of human motivation haven't changed in eons, but the ways in which we go about satisfying our desires, has.

      So, I'd suggest that you first become familiar with the basic structure of a good sales letter, then analyse every piece of advertising you look at to see how well it holds up to the basic principles of good advertising.

      THEN copy selectively, and with focus.
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      • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
        Originally Posted by Collette View Post

        Writing out letters by hand is tied to how we develop muscle memory, and subsequently internalize those memories into our subconscious.

        Repetition is an essential part of developing muscle memory. However, mindless repetition is almost useless in developing superior skill sets.
        Wow, do I agree with this!

        One of my hobbies is playing the piano, and after reading your comments, it seems like that is almost identical to copywriting.

        There is a BIG difference between playing notes and making music. Doing mindless repetition of scales, arpeggios, etc. may teach the muscles but certainly doesn't lead to music.

        Playing just the notes doesn't make music anymore than writing just words doesn't make for great copy!

        BTW, If anyone here is into music, Classical KUSC out of Los Angeles, Ca is having their annual "bad" music night on New Years Eve. I think they also have streaming on their website. If your ears can stand it, it is a great learning experience .

        Marvin
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    • Profile picture of the author Jag82
      Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill View Post


      After writing out a Gary Halbert letter by hand, I was enveloped by light. Peace and understanding flowed through my chakras, opening my third eye, and bringing forth the ineffable wisdom achieved only by the elect.

      I have been instructed by the Man on a Flaming Pie who appeared to John Lennon to form the Kundalini School of Copywriting immediately and spread the word to all.

      Hell, I'm even going to throw in some NLP secrets that have caused readers to reach for their wallets so quickly that they broke their fingers.

      Om.
      Ken, you post made me smile.

      I see you are well-schooled in the art of meditation and pranic healing.

      May the force be with your Kudalini School of Copywriting.

      Atma Namaste.

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  • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
    I can easily believe it might take 5000 ads or so to "get it." But no time like the present to get started.

    No, I don't understand the magic. But that is hardly unexpected not being a copywriter. But I have to admit, the ability to sway thoughts via the written word is intriguing to say the least ... and magic at best .

    Okay, I've gone out and found the ads talked about in Gary Halbert's newsletter, and over the next week or however long it takes, I'll go ahead and write them out by hand.

    To save the trouble of searching for anyone else interested, here is a thread on the WF that has links to them:

    http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...omplished.html

    Many thanks for your input!

    Marvin
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  • Profile picture of the author Zentech
    No, I don't mean in a super-detailed way, but just a quick examination of the key points. To examine 5,000 ads in detail, systematically, would of course be a Herculean task and an implausible claim to make. I sincerely thank you for calling me on this, as you've made me aware that I might have inadvertently sounded like I was trying to BS people, and that's the last thing I want to do. I hate BS. Everybody says they hate BS, but Lord knows I really do. There's far too much of it, especially in business.

    So... I agree, the term "dissect" was probably the wrong one to use, as it implies a lengthy, detailed examination. I was referring to more of an instinctive grasp of the key elements. I wouldn't necessarily call that "superficial," though. It's just a different way to approach things.

    But yeah. Let's change "dissect" to something more like "attack." A quick, aggressive look at what makes an ad tick. And yes, I can do this. Really anyone can, if they have a certain mentality. I have a love/hate relationship with advertising which has really leaned much more to the "hate" side historically.

    Tearing ads apart comes naturally to me, and writing them is at least partially a process of applying what my cynicism has taught me. I understand advertising partially because I make it my business to study all forms of manipulation and behavior control. It's part of my full-time avocation, which is the study of psychology, philosophy, and human culture. It's my obsession and the focus of my life.

    I don't blame anyone for either not understanding this or simply not buying it. I'm a rather weird guy and most definitely not your typical Warrior Forum member. My thinking is profoundly different in many ways. If that sounds in any way patronizing, it's not meant to. I simply know no other way to say it. I'm an unusual sort of guy. More than a bit of a weirdo, really. The way I think would probably shock many here, but it does give me certain insights, and the way advertising works is one such area.

    But yeah, "attacking" 5,000 ads in a lifetime is probably a massive understatement. I shred every ad I hear on TV, often out loud, which sometimes drives my wife nuts.

    Also, please understand I'm not saying any of this with any kind of "selling myself" in mind. I'm not even working or taking clients at the moment, and that's totally by choice.

    I really don't care whether people believe me or buy anything I say - but don't take that as a brush-off. Some of you guys are fantastic at what you do and I enjoy talking to you.
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    • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
      Originally Posted by Zentech View Post

      No, I don't mean in a super-detailed way, but just a quick examination of the key points. To examine 5,000 ads in detail, systematically, would of course be a Herculean task and an implausible claim to make.
      Just one of the problems with trying to dissect ads is having the background to understand them and being able to differentiate the good stuff from the garbage.

      And I took your statement about dissecting ads as you meant it.

      It would appear, at least at the start, that only looking at the great ads (in a detailed way) would be the way to start. Otherwise, it could get really confusing as to what constitutes a good ad.

      An analogy might be learning to detect counterfeit money. I'm told that tellers learn to tell the difference by handling a great deal of legitimate bills. At that point, a counterfeit bill can be detected because it doesn't "feel" right.

      I've gone through some of the back critiques here. At first, the original copy seemed just fine. But after reading the critiques, I started to be able to slightly "sense" that the copy wasn't quite right. That doesn't mean that I knew what the problems were or how to correct them, but rather it didn't "feel" quite right.

      It is a start.

      Thanks to everyone for all the help and comments!

      Marvin
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  • Profile picture of the author AdmiralGloom
    Gary Halbert is the reason I chose to become a copywriter (undboutfuly). I am a very uncertain person when it comes to doing certain things, always sceptical, but His letters are just fantastic!

    Thanks for showing this one, taking it truly to heart.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    you're not supposed to understand it. thats the whole point.

    if you understood it, you wouldn't be asking how to write better... you'd already be a great writer.

    just do it and thank hank later :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author Hank Rearden
    OK -Logically and theoretically, I agree 100% with you, Collette.

    Also you, Ken ;-)

    But both of your posts let me know you've never sat down with the dozen or so
    classics he talks about, and copied them down a few times, by hand.

    You can't really explain it. You "absorb" a measuring of your words... the "energy" of
    copy. And on repetition, you understand the ad on a deeper level than surface.

    I used the word "Magic" in my other post... but... I did not use it lightly.

    Here, I'll prove my point to you - and help you become a better writer, in the process:

    (not that you need it, of course. I'm coming from the understand we're all constantly
    improving)

    Here's David Ogilvy's famous Rolls Royce ad:
    http://marchingagainstphilip.files.w...royce_stor.png

    As you can see, it's one of the shortest direct response ads you'll ever come across.
    Also, it's one of the least "commonly structured."

    Take just one hour, today, and write it down twice by hand. Not once, but twice. And
    here's a little tip I've learned from writing a few dozen of these bad boys out by hand:

    Imagine you're writing it down not simply to write it down, but writing it down for
    someone else to read.

    Something happens when you take this mindset - You measure your words, make
    every letter more carefully, etc etc etc.

    Whatever it is, it's conducive to learning.

    If... After this exercise... You don't agree that this process has a tinge of "Magic" to
    it...

    ... Then I can't convince you. I'm truly sorry.

    But I know from experience you'll "see the light." And maybe even the ghost of John
    Lennon ;-)

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    • Profile picture of the author mikelong
      I got a tremendous amount out of the Gary Halbert letters.

      I know at least a couple of other million dollar per year guys who learned a lot of their stuff from Ol Man Halbert - Travis Sago, Kelly Felix and John Reese.
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    • Profile picture of the author Prosechild
      Originally Posted by Hank Rearden View Post


      You can't really explain it. You "absorb" a measuring of your words... the "energy" of copy. And on repetition, you understand the ad on a deeper level than surface.
      yes, exactly. Copying the ads by hand also teaches you the right pace to move the letter along in order to persuade your readers to buy... teaches you how to be picky and economical and really make each word count... and how to be subtle when you address objections, that you can't understand in the same way from reading books about copy.

      The hardest part for me in following Halbert's advice was not being so quick to write - actually sitting still and learning time-tested fundamentals before I started drafting letters.
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      • Profile picture of the author AdmiralGloom
        I've just started this course. I really love it.

        I just finished Scientific Advertising and now am on the second chapter of How to Write an Advertisement by Schwab. SA was kind of confusing, I will return to it when I complete the others.

        It is really nice getting a solid collection of "The Classics".


        On my own tangent I have been first writing the answers to the chapter reviews by Schwab and than typing them. Following that I type it out and print it and put it in a plastic sleeve. All the answers are in this nice binder that I can refer back to in the future!

        P.S. Writing out as much as I can has dramatically increased my handwriting ability which was simply crap before.
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  • Profile picture of the author Marc Rodill
    Thanks Marvin for reminding me about this. And for the link to that thread with the ads. That's really cool and saves me a lot of time.

    I would certainly say writing Halbert's newsletters by hand, too, improved my writing ten-fold. But I've only done three or four to date.

    Thanks again for the reminder. Word on the street is, Dan Kennedy followed Gary's advice when he was first starting out. And now... Dan charges over $100,000.00 to write copy for his clients.

    Be good or be good at it, right?
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  • Profile picture of the author Dan Williams
    While my wife was watching the TV, I was listening to the commercials. Astounding! This time I was actually listening to the words, and they followed the same pattern that a lot of sales letters follow.

    This may be obvious to many, but it was the first time I actually heard the tactics being used
    Personally, I thought 9th graders wrote most of the commercials I've seen on TV...they suck as far as decent sales copy goes IMO
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    • Profile picture of the author Marvin Johnston
      Originally Posted by Dan Williams View Post

      Personally, I thought 9th graders wrote most of the commercials I've seen on TV...they suck as far as decent sales copy goes IMO
      The conventional wisdom I've heard is to write sales letters at the 7th or 8th grade level .

      But I also have no idea how they convert which is really the only way to measure their effectiveness.

      Marvin
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      • Profile picture of the author Dan Williams
        Sales letters "maybe" but these commercials are done and I'm wondering what the heck they were selling :confused: apparently they have the budgets necessary to hire the big dollar copy writers but choose to hire their son's in laws instead
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        • Profile picture of the author Oxbloom
          Originally Posted by Dan Williams View Post

          Sales letters "maybe" but these commercials are done and I'm wondering what the heck they were selling :confused: apparently they have the budgets necessary to hire the big dollar copy writers but choose to hire their son's in laws instead
          Most of the big dollar commercial spots you see have no need for copywriting.

          Nobody needs to be sold on the virtues of Coca Cola, McDonald's, or Toyota. Nobody needs to be told what they do.

          There's selling...getting your product in front of a thirsty crowd, getting their attention, telling them who you are and what you can do for them, and closing the deal.

          There's branding...taking an already known commodity and associating it with specific images, feelings, ideas, circumstances, etc.

          And there's positioning...taking an already known brand, and putting it at the forefront of the consumer's conscious (or unconscious) mind...hopefully ahead of the other big name competition.

          When somebody needs an IM product, we pay copywriters to be able to get a sales letter in front of them with headline, story, bullets, promise, etc...compelling enough that they buy something. We pay them to sell.

          When somebody needs a beverage, Coke pays advertising agencies to make sure the idea "Coke" springs into their mind before they even begin to realize that they might be thirsty for something else.

          They're playing a different game entirely.
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