6 Reasons Why I Seldom Seek Critiques Here

by vip-ip
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6. Copywriters usually aren't my target niche, and those comprise a good chunk of this sub-forum's readers. Besides, it would be silly to ask for a critique of a sales copy that's selling copywriting to copywriters.

5. Many people here give bad advice. I don't have the time or energy to look through their past posts, user by user, to see if they're worth listening to. Notorious copywriters like Bruce Wedding and the likes stand out no more than your typical newbie, unless I know of them by name.

4. Because of #5, I will not implement many of the suggestions I get. Therefore, asking for a critique is redundant for the most part.

3. It makes my business look weak. If a potential copy sale is coming my way, but I am unfortunate enough for them to care to look through my post history, copy critiques probably won't impress them. Hell shall freeze over before I unfairly lose a sale over something I post on WF.

2. People on here don't care. They'll give you suggestions for any reason - up their post count, try to get their sig link noticed, and so on - but not because they genuinely want to up your conversions.

1. In most cases, I'm better off getting suggestions for potential product benefits that your copy is missing or underrepresenting from people I sell to. That's because not all copywriters out there understand my market. Granted, I don't understand it today as well as I'll understand it in 5 years, but that's where split testing will come in. And that will be my endeavor, not yours.

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  • Profile picture of the author mandark
    Good post - a good mirror to Bruce's "6 reasons" post. I completely agree with both of them - I have never understood why people rely on forums like this to get critiques.
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  • Profile picture of the author arslih
    yah you are right...i agree with you
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    You seldom seek critiques here?

    That title is funny to me, this sub-forum might as well just be called..."how do I fix my salespage" in the form of a crituqe.

    Even if you aren't asking for one, chances are you're reading someone elses -- chances are you depend on them too. That's ok, so do I.

    Funny thread is funny.

    -Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author 247Copywriter
    Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

    People on here don't care. They'll give you suggestions for any reason - up their post count, try to get their sig link noticed, and so on - but not because they genuinely want to up your conversions.
    For someone who didn't even know who Vin Montello was a day or so ago, I don't think you have too much credibility to be in a position to advise others here.

    And copying Bruce Wedding's thread in a virtually identical format... just proves to me that you want to piggyback on his thread popularity whilst not coming up with an original approach of your own.

    Or perhaps, just like you said... you thought maybe you'll get a higher viewer count if you reverse engineer his argument, lay it out the same and hopefully get as many people as possible to see your signature?

    Come on, we wasn't born yesterday.
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    • Profile picture of the author vip-ip
      Ugh, Sally Sally Sally, here we go... is it OK if I call you Sally?

      Originally Posted by 247Copywriter View Post

      For someone who didn't even know who Vin Montello was a day or so ago, I don't think you have too much credibility to be in a position to advise others here.
      Correction, I didn't know who a Vin was, there wasn't a last name. Of all people, I'd expect someone with your expertise to pay attention to a detail like that if you're going to make such bold statements. I have a Vin at work, I have a friend named Vin in college, and I read a blog by a Vin Thomas (google it if you'd like, it's good). I got confused over a common name, does that mean I must lack credibility?

      But because I've been following your posts for a while, 247, I noticed that you must prove your point, so I expect that your rebuttal is going to sound something like, "This is the copywriting forum, where 'Joe' means 'Sugarman' and 'Vin' means 'Montello'." Surprise me if I'm wrong.

      Originally Posted by 247Copywriter View Post

      And copying Bruce Wedding's thread in a virtually identical format... just proves to me that you want to piggyback on his thread popularity whilst not coming up with an original approach of your own.
      People piggyback on success when they have a purpose. There's no "salesy" purpose for this thread, or whatever you want to call it.

      But let's presume that I was. Let's assume I have a link to my $1,500+ copywriting service in my signature and I want people to go, "this guy knows his stuff, I want to hire him." OK, great. I know a lot of folks like you will be tearing my thread to shreds, so thank you for fulfilling that expectation, number one. Number two, copywriters worldwide will agree: if it ain't broke, don't fix it. An 'original approach' is 'fixing it.' As per our assumption, I wanted to ride Bruce's wave to sell more, right? You just said that that's exactly what I did, so that would be my second expectation.

      Originally Posted by 247Copywriter View Post

      Or perhaps, just like you said... you thought maybe you'll get a higher viewer count if you reverse engineer his argument, lay it out the same and hopefully get as many people as possible to see your signature?
      No, what I did think was that I'll get a higher viewer count if I reverse engineer his argument, lay it out the same and hopefully get as many thoughtful, challenging or perhaps even agreeing replies (which, in this forum, are rare; people seem to love disagreeing here a lot more than agreeing). My signature has nothing to do with copywriting. Well, scratch that. It is a sales copy. But who's isn't? **ahem**looks@247's** And if I make a sale off of it - which I won't - good.

      Originally Posted by 247Copywriter View Post

      Come on, we wasn't born yesterday.
      We wasn't. We wasn't indeed.

      Wouldn't be surprised to see that on a $247 sales copy.

      Best Regards,
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      • Profile picture of the author 247Copywriter
        Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post


        Wouldn't be surprised to see that on a $247 sales copy.

        Best Regards,
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        It say's 'from just $247'.

        Thank you for clarifying your __________.
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  • Profile picture of the author Joe Benjamin
    That was lame, dude.

    You're contradicting yourself on reason #2. At least with Bruces post
    it was a rant WITH good reason.

    Your "re-enactment" of the original post is just that -- a phony. With
    NO rhyme or reason.

    I'd say, if you're getting a free critique, it's WORTH spending the time
    you didn't pay any money for to see what someones copywriting cre-
    dentials are to know if their advice is worth implementing.

    ...atleast, I figured, it's the LEAST you could do out of respect for the
    person who IS giving you advice.

    And, it really isn't difficult to see if someone's qualified or not if you
    got half-a-brain.
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    • Profile picture of the author vip-ip
      Down with the censorship! I realize this is a business forum, but some folks take it waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too seriously ... do you guys ever read threads like this for fun? :rolleyes:

      Originally Posted by WhoIsBenjamin View Post

      That was lame, dude.

      You're contradicting yourself on reason #2. At least with Bruces post
      it was a rant WITH good reason.

      Your "re-enactment" of the original post is just that -- a phony. With
      NO rhyme or reason.
      Have you ever written someone a critique because you care about their success and really want them to up their conversions, for no reason? Here's a good test to figure it out: do you ever review a sales copy if you know there is absolutely 0% chance you'll sell anything to the OP? If your answer to both is "no," then my point stands. Reasons like "I want to give back to the community" are a rare species, and those who actually do it - AND give actionable advice - are a goldmine.

      Originally Posted by WhoIsBenjamin View Post

      I'd say, if you're getting a free critique, it's WORTH spending the time
      you didn't pay any money for to see what someones copywriting cre-
      dentials are to know if their advice is worth implementing.

      ...atleast, I figured, it's the LEAST you could do out of respect for the
      person who IS giving you advice.

      And, it really isn't difficult to see if someone's qualified or not if you
      got half-a-brain.
      That's true, but like the title of this thread says, I seldom seek critiques, therefore I rarely have to do that.

      @PJChavira: you do know you can hide affiliate links better than that, right?

      Best Regards,
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      • Profile picture of the author 247Copywriter
        To be perfectly frank with you and not being rude or anything but...

        There just doesn't seem to be any point at all to your thread.

        What is the point of your thread?

        What are you really trying to say VIP-IP?

        What pain are you in besides the butt?

        What specifically is your problem?

        Engage...
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      • Profile picture of the author Ross James
        Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post


        @PJChavira: you do know you can hide affiliate links better than that, right?
        So then what's the story behind bullet point #3? You just knocked yourself down a peg bud.

        -Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    @OP - If it's in your interest to avoid any more punitive damages to your e-business, I'd suggest letting this thread fall back into its black-hole, never to be heard of again.

    Best,

    Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author PJChavira
    I Have To Agree^.^
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  • Profile picture of the author vip-ip
    @247, hopefully get as many thoughtful, challenging or perhaps even agreeing replies. No pains, no problems.

    @Ross, my 3rd point was about me writing my own history with every post. I don't understand what that has to do with me pointing out a new member's signature.

    Best Regards,
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Here let me help you.

    3. It makes my business look weak. If a potential copy sale is coming my way, but I am unfortunate enough for them to care to look through my post history, copy critiques probably won't impress them. Hell shall freeze over before I unfairly lose a sale over something I post on WF.

    This whole bullet point is a train wreck
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  • Profile picture of the author vip-ip
    Ah, I get it, makes sense. If you say so. I get a kick out of it nonetheless.

    Here comes the following argument from the user who lives 5 minutes into the future:

    "But what do you mean, vip-ip? This is a place of business, not Disneyland, and your posts aren't impressing anyone. You shouldn't have fun here. You have to be sales-oriented and do the most you can to sell-sell-sell!"

    I'd like to challenge that assumption, because I get a lot out of discussions as well as sales. Nonetheless, I don't believe that I lost a legitimate sale that could've came from someone I want to work with.

    Best Regards,
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Stop future pacing your own doom vip.

    Keep it going if you want, but really, where are you going with it?
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  • Profile picture of the author vip-ip
    I'm not an oracle, I don't know. Again, I'm just trying to have a civil discussion about asking for critiques, this has gone off topic way too much. Any decent commentary?

    Best Regards,
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    • Profile picture of the author Ross James
      Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

      Here comes the following argument from the user who lives 5 minutes into the future
      Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

      I'm not an oracle, I don't know.

      vip-ip ...

      My mind is blown.

      -Ross
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    • Profile picture of the author Marc Rodill
      Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

      I'm not an oracle, I don't know. Again, I'm just trying to have a civil discussion about asking for critiques, this has gone off topic way too much. Any decent commentary?

      Best Regards,
      vip-ip ...
      Here's an old parable that comes to mind:
      A Frog and a Mouse once formed a friendship on the land. The Frog, one day intent on mischief, tied the foot of the Mouse tightly to his own, in good fun. Now joined together, he gradually led him towards the pool in which he lived, looking for food, and soon discovered it was a very hot day. He suddenly jumped in, concerned only with cooling himself, dragging the Mouse down with him.

      The Frog enjoyed the water greatly, and swam all croaking about, as if he had done a good deed. The unhappy Mouse was soon suffocated by the water, and his dead body, still full of air, was carried to the surface when the Frog grew tired.

      A Hawk took notice, and, in the blink of an eye, pounced upon them with his talons, carrying them aloft. The Frog, still tied to the foot of the Mouse, was carried off a prisoner before he could escape, and was eaten by the Hawk.
      I once read in a famous book a quote I will not soon forget: "Negative feedback always says in effect, stop what you're doing or the way you are doing it, and do something else."

      That being true, it's clear a friendly discussion never got a chacne to grow legs here. Observing the reaction objectively may help you better accomplish your purpose in the future.

      Marc
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  • Profile picture of the author Mike Schwenk
    If you really want this thread to die, sitting here obsessing over every inane detail and posting all the "nuh-uh" garbage isn't going to get it there any quicker.

    But, I digress.

    Carry on...
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    • Profile picture of the author Mike Schwenk
      Originally Posted by Ross James View Post

      Who said I wanted it to die Mike?

      Strong presupposition.

      -Ross
      Tisk, tisk...

      You may notice that you weren't quoted in my post.

      That would mean it's directed at all those who dislike the OP's post that may, indeed, wish this thread to be buried.

      Generally if something is disliked, someone will want to get rid of it, no?

      Strong presupposition, Ross.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    I already deleted my message, it's no longer here anymore.

    I see your point,

    Have a good one.
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    • Profile picture of the author 247Copywriter
      And me, I'm not trying to be a dick, to quote Daniel Scotts favorite expression but I just don't understand what the point is, to this thread?

      Bruce Wedding had this recent topic completely covered.

      I'm just at a loss what the OP is getting at or feels is to be gained by making this new thread. But, I'll let it slide and allow others to chime in with their thoughts.

      Hopefully I'll be in a better position later to comment or not, as the case may be.
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  • Profile picture of the author RaptorGabe
    HAHAHAHAH well you stirred up the hornets nest with that one. Bad day at work?
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  • Profile picture of the author Bruce Wedding
    FWIW: Swiping my headline and template didn't bother me in the least.

    I'm not interested in the content though. After I read the headline, I said, "Thank goodness, one guy that won't be asking for a crit." and moved on
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  • Profile picture of the author Daniel Scott
    Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

    6. Copywriters usually aren't my target niche, and those comprise a good chunk of this sub-forum's readers. Besides, it would be silly to ask for a critique of a sales copy that's selling copywriting to copywriters.

    1. In most cases, I'm better off getting suggestions for potential product benefits that your copy is missing or underrepresenting from people I sell to. That's because not all copywriters out there understand my market. Granted, I don't understand it today as well as I'll understand it in 5 years, but that's where split testing will come in. And that will be my endeavor, not yours.
    A good copywriter will know the market far better than they know themselves.

    Ever tried running a survey? People won't tell you why they REALLY buy... they'll tell you the "socially acceptable" reason.

    We are students of human psychology. We understand people and their motivations. Usually, we know you and your market far better than you'd expect.

    5. Many people here give bad advice. I don't have the time or energy to look through their past posts, user by user, to see if they're worth listening to. Notorious copywriters like Bruce Wedding and the likes stand out no more than your typical newbie, unless I know of them by name.
    Then you need to learn how to distinguish BS from non-BS. I find it pretty easy to tell the hacks from the players, but maybe that's because I'm in the industry.

    In fairness though, it doesn't take long to figure out who is and isn't worth listening to, even if you just base it on track record.

    Wanted to address a couple of points here for your (and others') consideration.

    -Daniel
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  • Profile picture of the author J. Barry Mandel
    Civil discussion? Gone off topic? Decent commentary?

    Are you serious :confused:

    When you start an absurd thread which you dive bomb immediately straight into the ground by making 6 ridiculous hole-riddled assumptions and then you try hard to pull the nose back up afterwards, how can you really expect people to react positively?

    Justin

    Originally Posted by vip-ip View Post

    Again, I'm just trying to have a civil discussion about asking for critiques, this has gone off topic way too much. Any decent commentary?

    Best Regards,
    vip-ip ...
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