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Dating Salespage Needs a Polish

by Eric Lancheres
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Gary Halbert inspired salespage aimed at the dating niche needs a review, tweaking and polishing.

I'll be happy to compensate the copywriter for his time via Paypal. Obviously I know I could get some 'free feedback' but I really want to provide added incentive for those top copywriters that could really help me out.

Only apply if you have the credentials to back it up!

Thanks
#dating #polish #salespage
  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Originally Posted by kaybee123 View Post


    Only apply if you have the credentials to back it up!

    Thanks
    Define credentials? What does that mean? That could imply anything under the sun.. Like.. Yeah.. I Piss Excellence In Direct Response Choose Me

    What are you looking to do hire someone? You still haven't even told us what you need. Do you need advice, or do you need a completely new salespage?

    Big difference

    -Ross
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    • Profile picture of the author Sebastion
      Is it online dating? Pickup and seduction? Gay dating?
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  • Profile picture of the author LP Copywriter
    Hi Kaybee,

    You certainly picked a great time to optimize your holdings in the dating niche, and it just so happens to be one of my specialties.

    Check out my portfolio (sig), and get in touch if you're interested.
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    Paul
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  • Profile picture of the author DanielleLynnCopy
    Ross has a great point. The more specific you are, the more we can point you in the right direction.

    Reviews are useful for brand new pages, but in my experience, polishing, tweaking are okay... for an already decently-converting page. Generally, sales pages (and most things in life) need to be built up from a strong foundation.

    However, we're here and happy to help if you provide a bit more info

    -Danielle
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  • Profile picture of the author Eric Lancheres
    Hey! Yeah I should have included a little more information... here's the situation.

    Note: (Since I posted this, I already booked 2 people. One to re-write the 'story' so it's more compelling and then another to really work the marketing so it's not just another salespage)

    Let's do this in bullet form:

    - It's in the dating advice / seduction niche (Think David DeAngelo style)

    - I look for previous work done by copywriters, especially in the dating field, and traffic/conversion numbers.

    - Right now the first draft of the salespage is completed and online. Traffic started flowing so I could get a preliminary conversion rate in order to compare before & after.

    - I was looking for people that could help improve (review and/or re-write certain weak areas) the sales page.

    I already have a guy re-writing it so this project is for next week.
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