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I got a copy writing job!

by Sebastion
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Hi guys. I'm helping a friend, (He's paying me) to re-write his sales page (seduction niche). I can't send private messages yet to ask for help. I need to write him a quote and I need to tell him what needs to be done when I call him in a few hours.

I'm not allowed to post links here. Would anyone be willing to look at the page and help me identify the obvious work that needs to be done? I would be grateful.

Just pm me and I'll send you the link. I really want to upsell him on a total re-do of his page. I'll be very grateful to whomever helps me get this job. (Ross)
#copy #job #writing
  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Sebastian just a tip, say copywriting opportunity, it just sounds better and I hate the word job Anyways, That's cool congrats, what is the USP? That's a pretty competitive niche. Are you really ready to write a letter? You've only been a copywriter for less than two weeks? I've been following your threads, well good luck!

    -Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Haha, I just saw you called me out in your OP. I'm on Skype, do you have skype?
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    • Profile picture of the author Sebastion
      yeah it's tnewton22

      I've been article writing for this guy for a year now. He trusts me to do good work.

      I'm actually a dating coach. I am small famous in certain forums.
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      • Profile picture of the author Ross James
        Originally Posted by Sebastion View Post

        yeah it's tnewton22

        I've been article writing for this guy for a year now. He trusts me to do good work.

        I'm actually a dating coach. I am small famous in certain forums.
        Good for you.

        I can put my face next to another female and tell you I'm a David DeAngelos brother, while that will be good form of proof, proving to your market so that they believe what you're about to sell them will in some way solve their biggest problem is the challenge.
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        • Profile picture of the author Mike Schwenk
          While I wish you the best and can appreciate your ability to take action...

          Why don't you just take the product and use it to practice?

          You're coming here and asking to be spoon-fed details and have "the obvious" pointed out to you.

          If you can't even ascertain that much, do you really think you should be charging anyone (let alone upsell them)?

          I know that you might be thinking because you're a "dating coach" and have written articles, that you can simply blend the two together and be off to the races.

          However, that's probably not going to be the case.

          -Mike
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Well add me McFly, do you see my skype icon? Already trying to make me do all the work. Not off to a good start.

    -Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author Sebastion
    I added you Ross. Just chillin on the skype...waitin.
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  • Profile picture of the author greensmyle
    Originally Posted by Sebastion View Post

    Hi guys. I'm helping a friend, (He's paying me) to re-write his sales page (seduction niche). I can't send private messages yet to ask for help. I need to write him a quote and I need to tell him what needs to be done when I call him in a few hours.

    I'm not allowed to post links here. Would anyone be willing to look at the page and help me identify the obvious work that needs to be done? I would be grateful.

    Just pm me and I'll send you the link. I really want to upsell him on a total re-do of his page. I'll be very grateful to whomever helps me get this job. (Ross)

    Good for you, congratulations buddy!
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    • Profile picture of the author Sebastion
      Closed the deal. Plus commission. Rent is covered. Thanks warrior forum!

      BTW all my money is going back into training. I'll share what I learn.
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  • Profile picture of the author Sebastion
    He knew I would do great work because I do great work. He'll get his small investments worth. If the product flops he won't hire me again.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ross James
    Glad I could help you get the commission! value based copy is a better way to do business and benefits both sides.

    P.S. I'm always here to help.

    Goodluck

    Ross
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  • Profile picture of the author DanielleLynnCopy
    That's excellent We're all rooting for ya! Let us know how it turns out.
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