Video Sales Letter Copy Review - Ultimate Software Bundle
I am currently working on trying to up my conversions for my Ultimate Software Bundle (crabbydigital.com/products/ultimate-software-bundle). I will be transitioning this to its own site (UltimateSoftwareBundle.com). I currently sell this product on eBay & on my own site via ClickBank.
I have made a decent amount of eBay sales and website sales but my conversion rate is around a measly 0.4%. What you see was my first stab at writing real copy. I think I failed miserably based on the conversion rate.
I would like to split test this new video form and see if it works better for my product since I know this kind of product can be difficult to convey the real value.
I can provide you my document through, PM (not sure if this works for someone at my level), email, etc. It's your call.
Your thoughts or ideas are much appreciated.
Thanks again.
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