Conversational Copy Critiques by Orson Welles and Barry White

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Reading your copy out loud is a time-tested way to improve it.

Here, Mr. Welles offers constructive criticism...and a special favor...




Mr. White has some choice words for the copywriter...

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  • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
    "Cordially invites yo ass to come on down..."
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    • Profile picture of the author Collette
      SWIPE.

      I call first dibs on this quote. It's my new go-to line for QuikCritique. :p

      "This is very wearying one... it's unpleasant to read. Unrewarding. ...This is a lot of sh*t. You know that...?" â„¢

      Runners up:

      "What is it you want - in the depths of your ignorance - what is it you want? Because I can't deliver it!"

      "Cordially invites yo ass to come on down."

      *wipes tears from eyes*

      A single "thanks" is insufficient for these two gems.
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  • Profile picture of the author Harrisonamy
    Love it! Am keeping this for reference. :-)
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