I'm currently creating a NEW direct mail campaign and I wanted to know
your honest feedback and opinions on this headline -- including what you
would change, add, subtract, etc.
I want to know IMMEDIATELY what you feel the moment you read the head-line below and say EXACTLY what you're first impressions are (i.e.
do you want to read on? are you curious? Would you toss it in the trash?)
Also, if you wish, you can rate on a scale of 1 through 5 (5 being the BEST
and 1 being the WORST)
(drum roll please)
Which one strikes a bigger chord with you?